All In a Moment's Time

A white blanket will fall upon January.
It will cover my heart and freeze my soul
into solitaire. A love will blossom in the
mist of February. Unknown to me, that 
love will remain a mystery.

My luck will fail in the medows of March.
For my life will deplete and become parched.
Still - my heart will break in the hands of April.
A story that only time will tell.

A tear shall fall at the end of may, but even now
I don't know what day. The sun will peak over the 
horzion in June, still my sadness will conquer
the afternoon.

Explosions of flashing lights will fill the night skies
of July. As I sit here with my memories that have
gone and passed me by, but I will rest here in 
the lap of August.

Maybe one day my love will realize that I loved
him/her the strongest. The days I did lose in
the oceans of September - are the days that
I wish , I could remember.

We will plant seeds in October. Hopefully we
will become wiser and act older. Autumn is to 
become a great friend of November. How they 
will meet - I can only ponder. 

Now my visions begin to fade in the silence of 
December To understand them - is to know
life's everlasting embers...

Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 4/4/2015 7:17:00 PM
RIP :( :(
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Date: 3/2/2013 1:09:00 AM
Very pleasing and intriguing write, congrats:) Jag
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Date: 2/28/2013 6:21:00 PM
beautiful poem Lucilla....congrats on your win
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Date: 2/28/2013 2:48:00 PM
Great write, Lucilla. Congrats. hugs. Ralph
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Date: 2/27/2013 11:49:00 PM
a very lovely poem my friend Lucilla. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Maria
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Date: 2/27/2013 9:54:00 PM
Lucilla,, an excellent poem, for my contest CONGRATULATIONS :-) Goodnight~ PD
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Date: 3/11/2012 7:29:00 AM
Thank you for your comments and encouraging words! God bless you and have a wonderful day!!! JP
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Date: 2/27/2012 7:07:00 PM
just one word ! FANTASTIC
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Date: 2/25/2012 9:50:00 AM
Pretty descriptiveness in this poem. Good work Lucilla.
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Date: 2/24/2012 1:46:00 PM
You have colored all the months so beautiful in yours poem here Lucilla, thank you.Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 2/24/2012 10:27:00 AM
Awesome poem! Adding this one to my list of favorites! - Best to you, Karen
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