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"Caroline" has many origins Some say it means a melody to sing One Latin version of flattering verbs adds beautiful words and a blush to my face But that is not how it all came to sprout Names often come from something so proud and choices a parent will toss all about. Like the bonds of friendship and with a legacy's crown They were childhood friends, hardly apart So different they were, as friends often are Caroline a redhead, was freckled and fair My mother, Alicia, with very dark hair But bonded like sisters, strong ties from the start I have heard all the stories, of how they would run Through the meadows of childhood Doing the things, that little girls should Building a bond that they both understood But deeper it went…and when I was born This woman, I knew as my mother’s best friend Was the one who was there, when mother’s life ended When grief overwhelmed me, and together we mourned For my mother would die when I was fragile and young My mother’s dear friend, bore the arms that I found She wrapped me in love, and I am deeply so proud To wear and to honor, a friendship so lasting, it still carries on ~ ______________________________________________________________ For contest: What's In A Name.....sponsor C.T.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/8/2015 5:17:00 AM
Congrats Carrie! Love your mother's friend!
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Date: 12/7/2015 7:11:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie.
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:25:00 AM
Lovely, Carrie. Well done, and congratulations, Viv
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Date: 12/7/2015 12:10:00 AM
How lovely Carrie..glad to know about more of you.. congrats on fine win!
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Date: 12/6/2015 11:05:00 PM
Such a wonderful story, Carrie, thank you for sharing. Caroline is such a beautiful name.
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:03:00 PM
A wonderful tribute to a wonderful friend and namesake
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Date: 12/6/2015 4:04:00 PM
A very touching poem Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/6/2015 3:58:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your very cool win. SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 3:37:00 PM
Lovely CT
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:58:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your 2nd place win with this touching poem!--kashinath
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Date: 3/4/2011 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/4/2011 12:06:00 AM
Such a beautiful origin for this lovely name. You really must be proud. many warm congrats for this win.
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Date: 3/3/2011 4:47:00 PM
this is so sweet, carrie... bouquets for you and mom alicia with big cheers!:)huggs, nette
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Date: 3/3/2011 1:38:00 PM
WAs she your godmother then, after your mother passed on? Is Carrie the part of your name that represents both names? Or is there perhaps a middle name like Alice? Very interesting to know all this. COngrats on your placement in the contest. LUv, andrea
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Date: 3/3/2011 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations on the second place win in the contest of Linda, Carrie
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:45:00 AM
beautiful piece Carrie, congrats on your second place win in the contest
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Date: 3/3/2011 9:24:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your second place win in my contest What's in a Name with this superb entry .. thankxx for your constant support luv..
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Date: 2/20/2011 8:42:00 AM
What a beautiful and heartwarming story behind your name, Carrie :) I never even realized that your name could be short for Caroline :) You have beautiful names :) Really enjoyed reading this, it's so cool how this contest is revealing so much about our names :) hugs :)
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:37:00 PM
Fantastic as always from you on the theme, Good luck, Carrie
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Date: 2/19/2011 5:20:00 PM
Very touching poem Carrie.Enjoyed.Goodluck in the contest.
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Date: 2/19/2011 4:49:00 PM
this sensitive piece with a charm so personally yours is pure magic, carrie... so blessed to know your real names... your verse glows! winner to me... i miss your visits on my pages; would like to read your insights on " picasso in japan"; much appreciated! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 2/19/2011 3:50:00 PM
A nicely descriptive poem. I thnk Linda Marie will like this entry for her contest.
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Date: 2/19/2011 3:49:00 PM
How nice that your mother chose to name you after one of her best friends, Carrie. I didn't know "Caroline" was your full name. My birth certificate originally read "Marilyn" as my parents wanted to name me after a southern state. Then they decided they liked the Carolinas better than Maryland, so the certificate was changed to Carolyn. Enjoyed very much! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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