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Alice In Wonderland

Her voice captures you Enraptures you She sings and deep within Her heart drips in passions tears She reaches out, and touches air She is sultry, stylish and with flair Her Voice seduces you Her songs wrap around your heart She touches you in jazzy blues Her musical notes play on your mind She is buried deep within her own thoughts She sings of love, the one she dreams She melts before your eyes Unawares of the love she brings She kisses her song goodbye And looks into you, her sultry angel eyes In the dark of night, silently she fades away My funny Valentine ( feel free to guess on whom this poem is based ) Clue 1) Her first name is Alice Clue 2) New singer 2013 Clue 3 ) Name of song in poem

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/13/2015 4:10:00 AM

Simply stunning poem and vocals - wow wow wow :-) Hugs jan xxx

Lisa Cooper

Date: 5/5/2013 6:39:00 PM

lovely :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:37:00 PM

Thank you, here is the song it was based on!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc

Seren Roberts

Date: 5/5/2013 4:01:00 PM

Alice Fredenham I believe...Seren

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2013 4:38:00 PM

And the winner is!!!!!!! yes you got it!!! Doesn't she have a lovely voice? For anyone want to see her sing, just google her name!!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 5/5/2013 4:02:00 PM

My Funny Valentine

Karen Anglesey

Date: 5/5/2013 10:31:00 AM

My guess would be Barbara Striesand. Love the descriptions throughout.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:36:00 PM

Sorry, I missed answering the comments on this one!!!, Based on this song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/5/2013 10:27:00 AM

Arthur, what matters here for me is that this poem has been written and not for whom! This is a marvelous poem that anyone can put the name of the lady of his dreams! Wonderful work! Thank you!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:35:00 PM

based on this song!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc

Jack Ellison

Date: 5/5/2013 7:32:00 AM

WOW! Like to meet this lady you so eloquently write about! As Anne Lise said, "Alice In Wonderland"! Great... cheers!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:34:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc Based on that video, sorry for such late answer!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/5/2013 6:01:00 AM

What a lady!! - What a poem ..... it's gorgeous Arthur. - Alice in Wonderland, is not so beautiful ....... this is a lady that is unique! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:34:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise, was based on this video!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc, sorry I missed answering this poem for some reason!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/4/2013 8:59:00 PM

Is this poem about your wife... It is a good poem Arthur. I enjoyed... a very pretty feeling, this poem makes falling come easy... xox~ Linda

Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2013 9:03:00 PM

No wife, Its an amateur singer, I will say no more to allow others to guess!!!!!! Just saw your other comment, we almost commented at the same time!!!!! :)