Alice In Wonderland

Her voice captures you
Enraptures you
She sings and deep within
Her heart drips in passions tears

She reaches out, and touches air
She is sultry, stylish and with flair
Her Voice seduces you
Her songs wrap around your heart

She touches you in jazzy blues
Her musical notes play on your mind
She is buried deep within her own thoughts
She sings of love, the one she dreams

She melts before your eyes
Unawares of the love she brings
She kisses her song goodbye
And looks into you, her sultry angel eyes

In the dark of night, silently she fades away
My funny Valentine


( feel free to guess on whom this poem is based )

Clue 1) Her first name is Alice
Clue 2) New singer 2013
Clue 3 ) Name of song in poem

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/13/2015 4:10:00 AM
Simply stunning poem and vocals - wow wow wow :-) Hugs jan xxx
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Date: 5/5/2013 6:39:00 PM
lovely :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:37:00 PM
Thank you, here is the song it was based on!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc
Date: 5/5/2013 4:01:00 PM
Alice Fredenham I believe...Seren
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/5/2013 4:38:00 PM
And the winner is!!!!!!! yes you got it!!! Doesn't she have a lovely voice? For anyone want to see her sing, just google her name!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/5/2013 4:02:00 PM
My Funny Valentine
Date: 5/5/2013 10:31:00 AM
My guess would be Barbara Striesand. Love the descriptions throughout.
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:36:00 PM
Sorry, I missed answering the comments on this one!!!, Based on this song, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc
Date: 5/5/2013 10:27:00 AM
Arthur, what matters here for me is that this poem has been written and not for whom! This is a marvelous poem that anyone can put the name of the lady of his dreams! Wonderful work! Thank you!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:35:00 PM
based on this song!!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc
Date: 5/5/2013 7:32:00 AM
WOW! Like to meet this lady you so eloquently write about! As Anne Lise said, "Alice In Wonderland"! Great... cheers!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:34:00 PM
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc Based on that video, sorry for such late answer!
Date: 5/5/2013 6:01:00 AM
What a lady!! - What a poem ..... it's gorgeous Arthur. - Alice in Wonderland, is not so beautiful ....... this is a lady that is unique! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 2/12/2015 9:34:00 PM
Thanks Anne Lise, was based on this video!! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRKLnmzdwyc, sorry I missed answering this poem for some reason!
Date: 5/4/2013 8:59:00 PM
Is this poem about your wife... It is a good poem Arthur. I enjoyed... a very pretty feeling, this poem makes falling come easy... xox~ Linda
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 5/4/2013 9:03:00 PM
No wife, Its an amateur singer, I will say no more to allow others to guess!!!!!! Just saw your other comment, we almost commented at the same time!!!!! :)
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