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Below is the poem entitled AIR BENDER - AIR BALLOON which was written by poet Daniel Cwiak. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Have you ever ridden in a balloon on the air?

Oh, how I remember the quiet there.

As on the currents of wind we were borne

Watching the sun rise, as from the horizon it was torn.

Riding on nature's majesty...with nary a care.

Passing o'er the desert with all its splendor

Riding the gondola, the true "Air Bender".

Seeing the hills alight with the morning sun

Carefree, quiet, having such fun.

Memories of when our hearts were young and tender.

Copyright © Daniel Cwiak

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  1. Date: 12/6/2010 10:29:00 PM
    Hi, there Daniel, I was gonna tell you what Linda said below (just in case it was for the contest) It'sgood limericking though. So maybe you are my hubbie's long lost brother? He actuallyhas a few brothers out in the world he has never met. But the dad's last name is Workman!! Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:59:00 PM
    Very nice one Dan but I think this contest calls for Haiku form my friend.. did she ask for either Haiku or Limerick? not sure but double check ..good luck in the contest by S.K.A.T..luv..

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 1:30:00 PM
    If it is for the contest, i think it shoud be in haiku, Nice imaginative and crerative write, Daniel

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 10:49:00 AM
    This portrayal of that ride is as breathtaking as the ride itself, Daniel! Perfect imagery! Love, audrey

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 9:47:00 AM
    nice and airy

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:26:00 AM
    sounds like a nice ride... and a really well written poem... Michael

  1. Date: 12/6/2010 8:24:00 AM
    lovely picture you've penned, good luck in the contest