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Air Balloon High, Then Low

~ ~DURING THE RIDE~ ~ high waves sheer lunette miles of lithium popping haze air carousels swoon crisp thrills up up there mountain cones scaling bite-size crazed arms touching moon ~ ~ AFTER THE RIDE~ ~ why, what's so funny with wonderbra i'm wearing down my waist, floppy! (( for S*K*A*T's air balloon ride contest :))

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Constance La France

Date: 6/19/2016 1:09:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on having your poem featured for this week ~

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/14/2011 4:01:00 AM

Congratulations Nette on your win in SKAT*'s contest "Air Balloon Ride". Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 1/10/2011 10:55:00 PM

Congrats Nette on your well deserved win in the contest!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/10/2011 5:48:00 PM

Nette,, Congratulations in the contest. enjoyed,..p.d.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/10/2011 2:52:00 PM

A great write which I loved from the first time I read it... Congrats my dear...luv Michael

James Fraser

Date: 1/10/2011 11:37:00 AM

Oh my Nette, you have this Highlander chuckling big style here. Mega funny congrats on your koolio win....:)

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 1/10/2011 10:16:00 AM

Isn't the balloon supposed to be floppy after the ride, Nette? hahaah Congrats on your win in the contest with this interesting write. Dan C

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/10/2011 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your win..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/10/2011 7:38:00 AM

Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of Skat, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/10/2011 7:15:00 AM

hahaha, that last one is so cute. And the middle one is my favorite! Congratulations. LUv, Andrea

Wilma Neels

Date: 1/10/2011 3:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your awesome win in the contest Nette ;-) WN

Tahera Mannan

Date: 1/10/2011 2:57:00 AM

Many congratulations for this wonderful win Nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/9/2011 11:43:00 PM

Congrats Nette my friend on your super success in Irma's hot air balloon contest with this magical ride of an entry... enjoy your flight to the top of the charts tonight with luv..

Skat A

Date: 1/9/2011 10:09:00 PM

NETTE, CONGRATULATIONS!! ON YOUR WONDERFUL HOT AIR-BALLOON RIDE. HAD LOTS OF FUN READING EVERY ENTRY. THANK YOU~SKAT

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 12/11/2010 11:31:00 PM

oh my gosh-- haha what a way to end this fun air balloon series, Nette :) I'm sure this will be among the winners ;) hope you're having a great weekend :) -- nikko :)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/11/2010 5:57:00 AM

Hi Nette.. hope u are feeling better today and having a pleasant weekend my friend with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/10/2010 8:29:00 AM

NEW SOUP MAIL..Nette..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/9/2010 8:35:00 PM

I love that middle one the best, Nette. It's gorgeous and passionate! Luv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/9/2010 6:59:00 AM

LOL -- Such a funny closing verse in this haiku series, Nette. Had a good laugh reading it and was delighted by the imagery in the first two. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 12/9/2010 6:51:00 AM

OH HA HA Nette ... Irma will luv this entry .. so cool and so funny ... enjoyed this ride immensely luv... did the wonderbra make it home OK? haha.. wonderful Nette.. good luck .. with luv..

James Peranteau

Date: 12/9/2010 6:12:00 AM

Exciting and a very silly ending ! Great write dear poet ! You'll never get this bra-less wonder up there ! *smiles* much love, james

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 12/9/2010 5:36:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry today Nette and the best to you in the contest. I enjoyed reading it and I wish you a wonderful day. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 12/9/2010 4:36:00 AM

Enjoyed the ride in the air balloon particularly the second one, nette

Cecil Hickman

Date: 12/8/2010 9:08:00 PM

such a treasure to read, made me laugh for sure I could see it all,, uh oh well maybe not..any way all the best in this contest along with others,,and Thank you for your words that you leave behind after you visit my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Tahera Mannan

Date: 12/8/2010 8:59:00 PM

Hahah. Good one Nette. All the best for the contest.