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air......o

i .......want to take.......you
          in my arms
     kissing what i believe
 but ,( you are a ghost )
    and will not be touched
       yet..you touch me
                living...
        even when i sleep
you are the deepest part of me,
         a sleepless spirit
              my love

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  1. Date: 8/19/2009 4:36:00 AM
    you started out so fine--what a beautiful poem,can relate to it--excellent----charma

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 4:22:00 AM
    Orphani, excellent writing. I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup and wish you the best in your future writing. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/19/2009 3:29:00 AM
    so often in life other people speak truth about your life -as if you were other people a sea of souls.Well there's only one person who can't get some sleep and that's me!

  1. Date: 8/18/2009 8:32:00 PM
    Nice to meet you, Orphani. Welcome to the Soup! I like this piece, very well penned. Lovely, romantic...Great write. Keep sharing. Ruben.