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Ah-Choo

Sometimes, as you shoot the breeze, You’ll be startled by a sneeze. Even walking up the stairs, It can catch you unawares. With no allergies or colds, Sneezing often still unfolds. It may happen for no reason; Some lay blame upon the season. Sneezes serve to help remind us That the forces which designed us Left some mysteries to tease, One of which must be the sneeze.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/26/2012 2:17:00 PM
First - rate poem about sneezes! Love it!
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Date: 8/25/2012 6:24:00 PM
You've got to love a hearty sneeze. As children we used to sniff pepper off our hands for a good sneezing bout. Nice, light poetry, Ilene. :)
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Date: 8/25/2012 1:44:00 PM
oh, this is so great. I too wrote a poem a long time ago about sneezes and I remember it was monorhyme and how I also rhymed sneeze with breeze!
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:05:00 AM
Cute one..I can just see someone sneezing..It is the sneezy, wheezy, runny nose time of year for me for the Rag Weed is blooming..Thands for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 8/25/2012 10:01:00 AM
to true ilene, they sure come from out of the blue ;)
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Date: 8/25/2012 7:55:00 AM
Gesundheit! Very nice poem about a wayward wind... Terry
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Date: 8/25/2012 7:48:00 AM
Nice poem - hope you do not have the cold...Ah-choo !!! - Have a lovely weekend Ilene. - oxox love // Anne-Lise :)
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