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Ah, Lonely Woman

Ah, lonely woman watching the rising of the full moon, which gives off intense brightness... you seem a phantom! Trees are stately sentinels who protect you from danger, but they too need to be protected from the foul weather! Ah, lonely woman why wait? All you'll find is tiny stars that surround the oval moon... oh, what hope is there? Snow has already fallen, the cold wind will freeze your tears! Oh, only spring can melt them when sunshine returns!

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Date: 9/25/2011 12:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Andrew. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2011 8:40:00 PM
Hey hey hey! First place for YOU! Awesome descriptions ...especially the cold wind freezing your tears...only the spring can melt them when sunshine appears....this is winning magic, Andrew! Congrats to you!! Gwendolen
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:25:00 PM
Congrats Andrew on fantastic first place win my friend..luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 1:20:00 PM
Very creative work indeed..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:27:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Andrew
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Date: 9/19/2011 5:43:00 PM
cheers to spring p.d.
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