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Ah, Innocent Boy

A virgin's passion, too intense and so inflamed, burning quickly than the silent, blazed sunset... slowly dying as she plucked the small petals of the prettiest daisy, but quickly fell from her hand; lost never to hold again. Sparrows migrated South, but butterflies labored hard; footprints so intact: an unsaid farewell! Ah, innocent boy, deceived by tenderness, profoundly confused by the little joy so unfelt; ah, innocent boy, don't ever tell!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/25/2012 6:46:00 PM
What a lovely crafted piece. Congratulations on being featured here this week. A magnificent write and also a lovely story...most moving!
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Date: 9/25/2012 9:26:00 AM
How good to see one of your peoms featured this week.
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Date: 7/20/2011 9:10:00 AM
Congrats Andrew on a fantastic third place win with this equally fantastic poetry my friend...luv..
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Date: 7/20/2011 7:14:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Andy. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:12:00 AM
Congrats on your win in Brian's contest..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2011 4:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "A First 50 Postings" contest Andrew. Love, Carol
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