Again - the Shadorma Style

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~Again~ (Shadorma) The sun shines Another day arrived Here today The roses bloom The garden smile and laughs its best Sun is shining again In the night The stars glow the sky With their light Then the moon Above sends her message of love To the earth. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2006 March.01.2016

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Walter T. Ashe

Date: 3/2/2016 12:21:00 PM

Your lead in pictures preface your write perfectly! Could see being in each of these locales! Write on Dorian...Write on!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/16/2016 12:32:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly, Walter,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D