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Again, Left Alone

Again, left alone...... A year has been passed since I left home Again my life become lonely in the military barracks My life without you, left me with only tears I know that you never want to see me in tears But it's been so hard to be here without you When I am away from you, there is part of me dying and I don't know where to hide my tears Although, the distance has kept us away but your memories keep on speaks to me Always, It tells me that our love is to be loved No one makes me feel the way you do No one loves me so much the way you love me When I am stay at the door of your heart then I feel your inside flames that's burns my soul Oh my love, let God speed my love and bring me again into your arms soon. Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved @ 2015

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Date: 10/15/2015 3:32:00 PM
I enjoyed this one. Do you serve in the military then??
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Date: 7/9/2015 6:35:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
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Date: 6/17/2015 11:49:00 AM
enjoyed your write, luv p.d.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/21/2015 4:32:00 AM
Thank you for your comment my friend. Appreciated. Hugs Ravi
Date: 6/15/2015 2:32:00 AM
- Good morning from Norway, I wish you a wonderful new week Ravi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/17/2015 1:39:00 AM
Thank you Anne. Wish you the same. Enjoy. Hugs and kisses. love ravi
Date: 6/14/2015 12:39:00 AM
Ravi, I myself experienced working and being away from my family but in need such happens for us to discover ourselves, to grow more; for greener pasture and so.... I truly can understand your thoughts here! ~olive eloisa
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Date: 6/12/2015 12:16:00 PM
Hi Ravi, being away from home and your loved one is hard to bear; your words are ample proof of this. Very romantic! // paul
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Date: 6/11/2015 11:37:00 AM
Ravi, your poem is so sadly beautiful and wonderfully penned, such sadness and longing in each word and thanks for visiting my poem, fantasy
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Date: 6/11/2015 7:54:00 AM
Emotive work..I am sure that many soldiers experience the same feelings..Enjoyed reading your expression of love..Thanks for stopping by my work..Sara
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Date: 6/11/2015 3:20:00 AM
- Oh .... so heartbreaking .... beautiful written with longing and love, dear friend Ravi - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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