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After Dieting

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After Dieting

After Dieting Me, finally free I’ve untied my hands And let them explore Greedily Soft and rigid Hard and pliable Textures and smoothness, Merge Grabbing a succulent treat My fingers grip The lurid wrapper Twist I shovel the chocolate devil Through parted lips Madness consume me A.D.
For Dahlink D Guzzo's contest

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  1. Date: 6/11/2012 4:16:00 AM
    This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.

  1. Date: 9/25/2011 2:16:00 PM
    hehe! I'd say more but I think my refrigerator is calling me :) Happy day~N

  1. Date: 9/10/2011 2:41:00 PM
    ohhh yeah I just bought 2 expensive dark chocolate bars...mmm I allow myself a square every now and then! I have missed you! Where are you? light & love

  1. Date: 9/6/2011 3:41:00 PM
    big cheers on your happy win, brenda..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/25/2011 9:18:00 AM
    You have chosen an interesting theme to write on Brenda...Congrats on your HM.

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 4:11:00 PM
    Congrats Brenda on your HM in the contest for excellent poetry luv.. enjoy honor so special..

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 2:17:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "AC DC AD BC" contest Brenda. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 2:09:00 PM
    Congrats on your win in this fine contest...Sara

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 12:29:00 PM
    hey Brenda, congrats on your win David