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Afro Samauri Vs. the Choka: Scene One

Afro Samauri Is walking across a bridge, Without a worry. His destination Is in the back of his mind, Just waiting for him.

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Royal Trevino

Date: 6/5/2010 10:15:00 AM

Well seeing that there were quite a few scenes lol, this should be fun to write,," and let the reading begin haha", destiny awaits... good one, =(^.^)=Royal

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/30/2010 5:33:00 PM

had to read the rest...

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/27/2010 3:05:00 PM

love the character my self, this will take forever to read my computer is loading slow. At least i read the ending. it s like cheating on the test. maybe one in between to see how this afro is doing, love it. left you some s.m.