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Adonis of My Dreams

Adonis of my dreams, you never fade. Beautiful, how beautiful you are. Caresses in the night; the loving made. . . Dreams are these I wished upon a star. Ever more, I’ll hold the vision of Your angel face, for me the face of love. 5/23/13 for Broken Wing's Contest Forms - A Contest

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Darren White

Date: 12/14/2016 2:46:00 AM

Love it, your Adonis :) Congratulations!

Constance La France

Date: 12/13/2016 1:54:00 PM

Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely ABC poem, I really like it ~

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/26/2014 12:14:00 PM

Ooh pretty :) You've got the words that make hearts swoon :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/12/2013 9:49:00 PM

This is beautiful Andrea. An awesome write my friend. love phyl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/10/2013 9:50:00 AM

Andrea, A late congratulations on Alfred's ABC of love contest... very lovely... Love * Linda

Daver Austin

Date: 6/5/2013 10:08:00 AM

Is his name Eduardo? Love, daver

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/5/2013 7:46:00 PM

oh no, this one's name is Guy Loranger of French Quebec. I would love to know what became of him.

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/3/2013 1:14:00 PM

There is always a sense of mystery behind the man Adonis, of which you speak.....something sad telling of lost love. This is beautiful as always!

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/30/2013 6:33:00 PM

Nicely done. I have enjoyed reading a number of your poem today, love the variety and variation of your work.

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/28/2013 2:49:00 PM

I can almost see this paragon you describe so well Andrea wishing you all the best with this glowing piece

Robert Johnson

Date: 5/26/2013 3:10:00 PM

And the dream lives on. Venus, Oh Venus, Oh never mind.

Timothy Hicks

Date: 5/26/2013 1:09:00 AM

soup mail

Debbie Duncan

Date: 5/25/2013 11:57:00 PM

Oh I like this Andrea,,,, watched Magic Mike Channing Tatum, McConaughey today, My Soul Sucker poem was a poetry challenge ;}

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/25/2013 3:07:00 AM

An angelic quality this exudes...lovely, Andrea

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/24/2013 10:47:00 PM

Nice fantasy - beautifully expressed! I really like the two books you have sent me - I intend to read them - cover to cover! Tomorrow I am going to the Poetry Forum to read from my work. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne

Date: 5/24/2013 2:29:00 PM

love this romantic gem, my friend. Thanks again - great contest : )

Bl Devnath

Date: 5/24/2013 1:30:00 PM

Excellent expression with glittering words of gems like. Good luck in the contest. Thanks.....,loved always, bl

Kash Poet

Date: 5/24/2013 12:04:00 PM

GOOD one.Repeating the word BEAUTIFUL makes the 2nd line more appealing!Loved this Andrea.

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/24/2013 10:42:00 AM

wow just glad to get back to your wonderful poetry Andrea, not reading it, is the downside to my absents

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/24/2013 7:24:00 AM

This has a dream like quality Andrea. Well done!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/24/2013 5:25:00 AM

You have written another masterful write my friend, an awesome compilation of glorious words! I truly enjoyed reading this amazing poem this morning! Your image you have painted is purely remarkable! What a magnificent piece, Great Work!!