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Amidst the Fog

I slept in a blanket tight In a winter's dead of night Next day i woke up for a jog in the woods amidst the fog mist was here mist was there mist was all around i wore the jacket and begun the racket to hunt down the lure profound in each breath i vomited haze my torch was giving off a blaze In the shivering cold the naughty winds gave me a hold of the christmas waiting to come the more area i uncovered the more area comes covered still i continued to jog amidst the foggy fog

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Date: 2/22/2016 11:23:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, shreshth singh, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/31/2015 10:22:00 PM
happy new year
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Date: 5/27/2015 5:09:00 PM
Shreshth, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 5/27/2015 4:31:00 AM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Shreshth :) - Most arts demands training (we learn from each other), for me it is important to share and delight others - Thank you for choosing to share your poems here with us - I wish you good luck: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/26/2015 5:10:00 PM
Shreshth, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Shreshth Singh
Date: 5/26/2015 8:36:00 PM
why not...i would be glad to be friend of poets like u
Date: 5/26/2015 4:43:00 AM
This is wonderful! The form is free verse.. :D :D
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Shreshth Singh
Date: 5/26/2015 8:34:00 PM
Thanks a lot.. :)
Date: 5/26/2015 1:29:00 AM
Nice poem..i enjoyed the imagery alot, especially since I have a thing for foggy weather..lol
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Shreshth Singh
Date: 5/26/2015 8:43:00 PM
It would be a great support from ur side if u can suggest me any contest...... :D :D

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