Addressing Passion

She wears a slightly see-thru dress of pleasure That of which night accentuates the curves more Her chest showing nipples in equal measure Drawing power of acquiescence on shore Her form leaves me meandering towards lust That dress just blends into her skin, like her bust It all becomes one, shows off all her glory She has my heart, her love I sure do carry
Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 1/28/2013 8:34:00 PM
A lovely way to address the love she has for you. Thank you Russell, for sharing your heart and thoughts with us... enjoyed :-) always~PD
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Date: 1/28/2013 8:14:00 PM
Makes me feel all prickly Rusty, you drive a hard bargain with those eyes of yours. Better watch what you are looking at! :) Love, Lizzie
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Date: 1/28/2013 12:12:00 PM
Dear Russell, A very aesthetically erotic poem that made my heart dance in anticipation of the next line! A marvelous writing! Thank you for sharing!
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:59:00 AM
superb visual delight Russrll luv ..two elements of my favorites .. passion and Rispetto .. thankxx for sharing and uplifting my day on this frigid snowy morn my friend .. luv this work of dynamic art ..
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Date: 1/28/2013 7:24:00 AM
Lol, so good, Russell :). Sexy words!
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Date: 1/28/2013 5:40:00 AM
Passionate work...Thanks for stopping by..My work about Hillary was saying that she might run for president again..I am sure that idea did not come through very well..She has got grit and determination for sure..I am sure that would be good characteristics for the job of President..Sara
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Date: 1/27/2013 11:51:00 PM
Go ahead my friend, wear your heart on a sleeve. Lovely write Russ!! One love. Joy Wells
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