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Absence-A Pleiades

Absence- A pleiades Always thinking of you! Absolutely empty! Afraid of life alone! After you what is there? About to lose my mind! Alone always afraid Appear to me once more John Derek Hamilton August 11,2016

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Paul Callus
Date: 8/15/2016 6:39:00 AM
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Absence and loneliness...I can feel the yearning that comes from missing a loved one, John. Congrats on your fine win. // paul
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/16/2016 9:42:00 AM
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Thanks Paul.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 8/14/2016 9:10:00 AM
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I like the unique style of presentation you used, John. The emotion of loneliness comes through clearly. Congrats on your well written Pleaides! Thank you for supporting my contest. Blessings!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/14/2016 5:32:00 PM
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Thanks Kim I enjoy your contests!
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 8/13/2016 6:40:00 PM
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Your slant makes it look like the person is stepping further away... very clever of you John! Congratulations on your win. It's nice being in your company. ; )
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 9:33:00 PM
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Thanks Connie, likewise to you!
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Winged Warrior
Date: 8/13/2016 1:01:00 PM
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Congrats!!! my friend...well done...god bless...^WW^
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 1:53:00 PM
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Thanks WW
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/13/2016 9:59:00 AM
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Dropping back with my congrats John:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
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Thanks Jan, yours was very worthy.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2016 7:54:00 AM
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- Congratulations on your winning poems, John ! - Great !! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 11:35:00 AM
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Thanks Anne Lise
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/13/2016 6:17:00 AM
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Back to congratulate you on your win, John:) This is really well deserved:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 11:34:00 AM
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Thanks Jo
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/13/2016 3:51:00 AM
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John, this one is my favorite out of all the entries..congrats on your placement :)-luloo
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 11:33:00 AM
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Thanks Laura you are so kind.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/13/2016 1:14:00 AM
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VERY nicely done, John. You really added to it with the slant!
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/13/2016 11:33:00 AM
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Thanks Andrea
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/12/2016 1:33:00 AM
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Ah! what a beautifully structured poem, John:) I can feel the pain:) Sure to be a winner:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/12/2016 8:58:00 AM
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Thanks Jo, don't know about that there is a lot of great entries but thanks.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 8/11/2016 10:32:00 PM
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Such angst, such longing! Great job, John! GL in the contest:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/12/2016 8:57:00 AM
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Thanks Laura
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 8/11/2016 8:51:00 PM
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Well penned. Enjoyed. Best wishes
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2016 9:27:00 PM
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Thanks Anisha
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/11/2016 5:27:00 PM
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You portray loneliness so well in every line good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/11/2016 1:03:00 PM
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I can feel your loneliness in this poem, John. It makes me sad. Good luck in the contest.
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Daniel Turner
Date: 8/11/2016 3:58:00 PM
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Must be an excellent write! It made me feel something:)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2016 3:54:00 PM
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It's just a poem, not true feelings at the moment, thanks for your concern.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/11/2016 12:57:00 PM
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- Competent written, John - I wish you every success in the contest, hoping you'll win - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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John Hamilton
Date: 8/11/2016 3:55:00 PM
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Thanks Anne Lise very kind of you.

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