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A Wreath On Dusk

How often I have watched the sun descending into dusk, and dusk, absorbing sun, exudes bright flavors for the eye. It's eye candy, often variegated, splendid in its hue. Those hues, dessert at end of day, sweeten with succulent delight. What delight in skies of mango, cantaloupe or marmalade, a marmalade of tangerine with raspberry mixed in! Sometimes in vanilla skies are Crème brûlée or honeyed gold; golden dollops of meringue above a lemon ball of sun. Other times, sun lies concealed by clouds in chocolate skies, or chocolate with the purple-gray of poi in cotton candy wisps of pink - pink or bright red cherry heavens, sometimes luscious plum - that plum reflected in blueberry seas; what treat in watching dusk!

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Date: 8/21/2012 11:51:00 AM
Many congratulations on your win Utah lady xx
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Date: 8/21/2012 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Nette's "Wreath" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/20/2012 2:32:00 AM
Excellent and beautiful piece,Andrea....Congratulations on your superb win...Kudos to you..Great write,lady..
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Date: 8/19/2012 8:34:00 PM
I love the fruit mentioned...thewhole poem is a winner. Congrats to you!!
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Date: 8/19/2012 1:50:00 AM
Andrea belated congrats on your win...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 5:28:00 PM
congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 8/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
((()))!!!Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:08:00 AM
Love it again!!A big congratulations on your win in the contest Andrea.Honoured to share the same spot with you.
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Date: 8/18/2012 9:02:00 AM
i could taste the flavors of your kind of dusk , andie, and feel the beauty of such night in every line.. what an amazing wreath!.. clap, clap to you for your honeyed win in my contest!.:) hugggs!
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Date: 8/18/2012 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on yur creative wreath. i would like to try this form again.
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:54:00 AM
Love the flavor of this wonderful poem Andrea. love phyl
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Date: 8/15/2012 2:39:00 AM
I came back and FAV this one!!
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Date: 8/14/2012 8:37:00 PM
Tastey Andrea - I want to come over for desert! J.A.B.
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Date: 8/14/2012 2:52:00 PM
You've opened my eyes to the sunsetting sky's with your delectable turning to nights. I had no idea there was such a sea of dimming the daily lights. I'm too busy watching all the reality botching. In the evening crap on tv. Which stands to reason in this time of season we should just go outside and see. Luck! :):)
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Date: 8/13/2012 9:27:00 AM
I just did a delightful drowning in your huge fruit bowl. Deeeelicious! Luck in the contest. daver
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Date: 8/12/2012 10:18:00 AM
From all spheres of the Sun's colour during the dusk beautifully pictured where eyes feel really alike. Loved the reading and wish you best in the contest. Always, bl
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Date: 8/11/2012 5:20:00 PM
i want some of that raspberry licorice. tasty wreath.
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Date: 8/11/2012 1:44:00 PM
wow, a tasty write here, my friend - a big winner for sure
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Date: 8/11/2012 12:13:00 PM
Great contest entry Andrea, never tasted sky before.." ( best wishes )
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Date: 8/11/2012 10:11:00 AM
Revisiting this one ...almost 20 syllables in each line......it brings a slow rhythm while I read the poem.
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Date: 8/11/2012 4:54:00 AM
An awesome write here.....such a colorful poem...Love it!
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Date: 8/10/2012 9:59:00 PM
A real fantastic write from a great poet like you, Andrea. I am sure this wins! I have enjoyed reading it. Good luck always!
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Date: 8/10/2012 7:36:00 PM
Well...YUM!:) A great sensory write, Andrea. Love the bright and colourful imagery. Thanks for the comment, I didn't use a translator, but I'm thinking I've made a couple of errors.:( Best wishes, and lots of fun with that contest!! love, Mikki
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Date: 8/10/2012 3:49:00 PM
this was awesome Andrea, like it!! good luck in the contest..Hugs Laila
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Date: 8/10/2012 2:11:00 PM
great write Andrea......love ...Joseph.
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