A Word Or Two, Maybe More

What advice should I be giving? Who am I to say anything? I wish to convey a word or two, maybe more As a result of what life gave me to export. But advice I will not give you Yet it is my mandate to share with you Just a word or two, maybe more For I am related to you by the love of the Lord. How could I keep to myself His gifts Especially those I received through hardship Enriching me with a word or two, maybe more Most because I met so many relatives along sea shores. We all sail away across the seven seas our journey through warm and cold streams I know you too have a word or two, maybe more To share sailing through high and low pressures encores. Now do you see, this isn't advice, but a summon Do you see how much we have in common? This is just a word or to, maybe more But sharing life with you makes me love you all the more. By CarolineCecile Copyright © 09/16/11

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Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 9/17/2011 8:19:00 AM

Hi Caroline. cool poem inspiration. Haven't visited you in a while. Hope all is well with you outside of poetry land. I haven't b een being inspired much of late but still like to read others. -Bob

Kash Poet

Date: 9/9/2011 11:52:00 PM

Sorry to say that you didn't get me..there is a line in your poem'This is just a word or TO'..I think it should be'This is just a word or TWO'.....pl have a look...regards...

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 9/7/2011 5:24:00 PM

Thanks for the review, Kash, but no, the last line is a one line, not two for the rhyme scheme. :)

Kash Poet

Date: 9/7/2011 3:31:00 AM

Very nice Caroline.Enjoyed reading it.In the last but one line I think it will be TWO instead of TO...pl.check...regards....kashinath