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A Wonderful Show - Nature a Popular Theme Contest

I am sitting here on the sand Knees bent arms hugging them close Looking in wonderment at the sky an artist's hand is painting it's finest work First a splash of red to lighten the dark sky followed by  lighter tones of orange to bring out the nights glow Then the yellow is applied to raise it up to the most beautiful sky, a wonderful show But nature has more to enthral us Silently wending its way through the nights sky I see large birds returning home Their silhouette completes the picture black shadows against a bevy of fiery hues I try to remember the tones using my minds eye. We are so lucky to be able to enjoy such a nightly scene nature bringing us pictures anew, for us to peruse Penned 30 May 2013

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Date: 6/2/2013 11:34:00 AM
congratulations sass just seen your win xx
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/2/2013 12:52:00 PM
Thanks Mandy ....Seren
Date: 6/1/2013 2:24:00 PM
CONGRATS! ;-) ~SKAT~
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2013 2:45:00 PM
Thanks SKAT....Seren
Date: 6/1/2013 9:49:00 AM
Seren, Congratulations in Kim M's contest... have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2013 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Linda ..Seren
Date: 5/31/2013 7:35:00 PM
So many things we often take for granted......if only we could look with renewed eyes....."pictures anew" as you have written so beautifully!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2013 1:12:00 PM
Thanks Linda ....Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/1/2013 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Carrie, we dont realise exactly how good our eyes are, they are like in built cameras with memory.. Thanks for the comment... Hope you look at my sketch and write for my contest...Seren
Date: 5/31/2013 5:49:00 PM
Marvelous beautiful piece of work here Seren. Thanks for submitting. Congrats. Kim
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/31/2013 5:59:00 PM
Thank you so much Kim, lovely contest, ...Seren
Date: 5/30/2013 8:22:00 PM
Seren, painting with her beautiful words. Should do very well in contest. Good luck
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/30/2013 9:13:00 PM
Thanks Nato, ....Seren
Date: 5/30/2013 4:14:00 PM
If you are not a painter.......you are indeed a painter of poetry! Lovely lovely!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/30/2013 9:11:00 PM
Yes Carrie I do paint, hav you not seen my work? Thanks for your comments.....Seren
Date: 5/30/2013 6:43:00 AM
Wow what a scene you paint with your awesome and glorious words! You have written a fabulous poem my friend! I really enjoyed reading your tremendous piece this morning! You have enlightened me with your splendor from this poem, Great Work!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/30/2013 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Russell ...Seren
Date: 5/30/2013 5:09:00 AM
a wonderful show indeed Seren beautifully written gl in contest
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Seren Roberts
Date: 5/30/2013 6:51:00 AM
Thank you Linda ...Seren

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