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A Woman To Love...Barbara Jean Gorelick

I am reading; ARTISTIC POETRY I know Your LOVE, as I Know Sweet Lenore’s My Students All Smiled, as I read them YOUR POEM On my mountain You can see : “ Sunrise “ “ Sunset “ A Moonbeam, Silhouettes the LOVE in YOUR EYES The fingers of the Morning Sun, are mine : Caressing Your Face Living Life in the past? “No I’m Living Life in YOUR HEART” I long to touch YOU , to hear the Music of YOUR LOVING Voice I Long to Hold YOU ; as YOU are Holding me : LOVE--ETERNITY As I try to Write, my emotions shake; My HEART indulges in LOVE Flesh to Flesh : as OUR bodies Entwine, Two Hearts ; One “ Heartbeat “ Barbara Jean Gorelick I Embrace YOUR LOVE with Kisses from my Heart My Dearest Most Only BELOVED, for eons of FOREVER, We can be as ONE Inspired by Barbara's POEM “ H Garvey Daniel Esquire…my poetry friend “ Author’s Note : I would like to enter this in “ Adeleke Adeite Contest : “ Praise your poetry soup pal “ My problem is I do not know what form to call this Piece of POETRY Please Help YOUR Liege ALWAYS LOVE…HG Written for Adeleke Adeite’s “ Contest “

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Date: 7/31/2010 10:50:00 PM
a very precious love, you will always know this love.i wish the best for you&Barbara, always.my oh so sweet spirit brother(: i love you always. no matter how far apart you are. ~Always&Forever your spirit sister, Lynn
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Date: 7/20/2010 7:46:00 PM
Congratulations, HG. Barbara is an awesome beautiful lady. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:18:00 AM
Congrats to my Silent Beau, HG, on a wonderful win about the woman in his life and his LUV, and a fabulous write to tribute her in the poetry pal contest.. enjoy your special win today and am joining your ranks now ..getting married on August 22nd in Calbria, Italy with my long time LUV.. sharing the romantic ride ..your forever "Sweetheart".. with luv..
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Date: 7/20/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations HG on your win in African Asset's contest "Praise your poetrysoup pal". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:31:00 AM
HG,, isnt this just wonderful? Congrats! mail...BG
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:24:00 AM
Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win in my contest, thanks for the support. You a simply a super Souper! Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/20/2010 10:24:00 AM
Big congratulations to you on your wonderful win in my contest, thanks for the support. You a simply a super Souper! Don’t drop your passionate pen, keep writing! With love, always, Adeleke
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Date: 7/10/2010 1:13:00 AM
Hi HG :) - what a moving and beautiful poem for Barbara (her surname's missing an "e" I think)-- I'm sure she loves this poem! I think I better go check out hers-- you are so right, Adeleke's contest sure has inspired us to appreciate our poetry soup pals-- and let them know-- very cool! And hmm I am no expert in the forms of poetry but maybe you chose right...:) hope you're having a great weekend! --nikko :)
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:18:00 PM
beautiful, very breathtaking hope she enjoys the beauty of your poem. The best of luck to you in the contest,..p.d.
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Date: 7/9/2010 11:13:00 PM
aw! good luck! :D
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