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A Whisper Or a Bang

Did the universe come into existence from a bang or a whisper looking out into space, the Hubble telescope then see's, the life of stars gas the cloud of hydrogen the birth of baby suns Hydrogen the mother of life create's the suns yet where does hydrogen come from does space the proverbial nothing does space the infinite nothing condense on itself to create something does an infinite amount of nothing create the energy, to make a hydrogen atom perhaps we started with a whisper and not a bang hydrogen create's the suns Suns go on to create the other elements exploding suns go on, to create the planets water goes on to create life perhaps God is energy the guiding force behind it all mine is just a question' sent out into the world did we start with a whisper or a bang Hydrogen builds sun's but what builds hydrogen That I do not know.

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Date: 1/15/2015 8:44:00 AM
Good question.
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Date: 1/11/2015 9:35:00 PM
HI BERNARD,, congratulations on your well-deserved win, enjoying the elements above. Always :) LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2015 1:07:00 PM
Great poem! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:16:00 PM
Good question to ask. In light of all that man has learned it seems that there has got to be a creator. Congrats on your winning work. Sara
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Date: 1/7/2015 2:42:00 AM
Nice one Bernard, congratulations xx
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Date: 1/6/2015 6:09:00 PM
I love the way you used science to fuel and fuse your words!! Well done, Bernard!
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Date: 1/6/2015 5:50:00 PM
Very very cool! Kinda chicken or the egg yes? Have you hear of the ouroboros, the snake that eats its own tail to sustain its life, in an eternal cycle of renewal. Perhaps we can see [grok?] only a small segment of the curve? Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 1/6/2015 2:46:00 PM
intriguing premise I need to explore.. ohh so fine, Bernard... big congrats!
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Date: 1/6/2015 1:30:00 PM
Bernard, congratulations on your win. 7
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Date: 1/6/2015 12:11:00 PM
Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 1/6/2015 11:32:00 AM
A question it might be, but I am sure this informed author already knows a lot about the subject! Enjoyed reading this well tackled write. Congratulations on your merited win. // paul
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