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Winter Star

Winter star, so frozen where you are; in some glazed galaxy, how far is your lofty eminence? Shine you will, in your celestial world, perhaps your rays more ancient than Earth's first darkling crib; Where once none had been..... No earthly eye to behold thy majesty; shearing darkness 'til what final wall?

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Date: 12/22/2015 3:57:00 PM
keith, Congrats on your STAR theme. Love LINDA
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/23/2015 10:31:00 AM
Many thanks Linda! May you have a very Merry Christmas honey! Love Keith ;-)
Date: 12/22/2015 12:53:00 PM
Congrats on your win Keith
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Date: 12/22/2015 10:37:00 AM
Congrats my good friend on writing such a great star poem and on your win!!! YOU ALWAYS PEN UNIQUE AND CLASSIC VERSES FOR WE THAT ENJOY SO MUCH THE CLASSICAL ROMANTICISM FORM..
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Date: 12/22/2015 1:32:00 AM
Lovely write n win Keith.. big congrats!
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Date: 12/21/2015 11:47:00 PM
keith, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting my contest. SKAT
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 12/22/2015 3:27:00 PM
Thanks honey. Great contest SKAT, many lovely poems you incited! Your brother, LUV Keith ;-)
Date: 4/12/2015 3:43:00 PM
très belle
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Date: 12/27/2014 8:18:00 PM
This poem is a Star, as are you, amazes me your poetic style!
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Date: 12/23/2014 1:01:00 PM
A walk in the cold, made worthwhile by the sight of the heavenly star that brings back majestic memories. May Christmas retain its allure...may yours be a happy and blessed one. // paul
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Date: 12/20/2014 12:33:00 AM
The guiding star fascinates my eyes with its shining light..and you your words play so beautifully,sending me back in time to that crib awaiting Jesus Christ.
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Date: 12/18/2014 4:35:00 PM
That was a lovely walk.
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