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as daylight faded, sun seemed to cling to the rim of the earth we stood watching in silence, as if this were a final farewell soon, all that was left were clouds, and the sound of the late tide
______________________________ 4/15/15 For Judy Kono's Contest: "Captcha

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Date: 4/30/2015 6:02:00 PM
nice won. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 4/30/2015 12:37:00 PM
Congrats on this romantic winning work..Great job using a captcha..Sara
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Date: 4/29/2015 3:03:00 PM
all that was left was clouds and the sound of the tide, and your words leave that image on my mind, how wonderful the moment is that you have described, grats on your win
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Date: 4/29/2015 9:29:00 AM
Lovely. Congratulations on your win
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Date: 4/28/2015 7:32:00 PM
Such a lovely vision, Carrie. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/28/2015 5:42:00 PM
Love this one, Carrie!!
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Date: 4/28/2015 2:21:00 PM
I love the sound of the ocean...congrats on your win!
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Carrie Richards
Date: 4/28/2015 2:25:00 PM
Thank you Ed, for your very kind comments, here.....and on some of my other poems! I am honored and grateful for your visits ! :)
Date: 4/28/2015 2:03:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on your win... Nice CAPTCHA entry... Love LINDA
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Date: 4/28/2015 12:23:00 PM
dropping back with my congrats Carrie:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/28/2015 11:40:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest.
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Date: 4/20/2015 9:50:00 PM
A-W-S- -O-M-E-L-Y PRETTY!! All the best!!!!
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Date: 4/15/2015 3:23:00 PM
simply stunniing sijo Carrie good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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