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A Vampire's Seduction

Her dreams are filled with mystery and echoes in the night. Whispers heard inside a mist that draw her from the light. She feels her strength begin to wane each time he calls her name. He uses all his powers to control her in his game. Each night the sweet seduction pulls her more into a trance. His faraway embrace, like an intoxicating dance. She knows she can’t resist him even though she often tries. But when she looks upon his face she’s lost inside his eyes. The blood that burns inside his veins possesses a great power. An ancient curse which rules him makes him hunger and devour. And when he holds her in his arms she never can resist. The force which fuels his lust is felt inside his deadly kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/15/2013 5:20:00 PM
Samia, hope you are well... stopping by to say HI!:-) Congratulations with your featured poem of the week. Always~ PD"
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Date: 2/18/2013 6:21:00 AM
Hi Poet Destroyer, It has been a bad year so far but I am hoping it gets better. Thank you very much for your message.
Date: 4/10/2012 3:33:00 PM
You are too good Rockman! I mean it! You have such a wonderful way with words and rhythm. I love what you have written here ...Samia :)
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Date: 4/10/2012 2:53:00 PM
Let me change the first line since you've already placed her in his arms. How about... He strokes her raven locks of hair. His nose is on her skin. (I hate to repeat lines). Rockman
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Date: 4/10/2012 2:44:00 PM
He pulls her close within his arms. His nose is on her skin. Breathing in her female scent he smells no trace of sin. The freshness of her purity is food for his delight. Anticipation builds as he prepares to make his bite. He thrusts his fangs into her will and savors every taste. Lapping up the blood that spills with not a drop to waste. When he is done he lays her down upon her virgin bed. He wipes his lip and smiles knowing she is now undead. Another inspiring write Samia. Rockman :-)
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