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A Valentine 3-Course Meal

your hand brushing mine those long smoldering glances. . . . my appetizer the taste of your mouth a smorgasbord of kisses. . . . the scrumptious main course the perfect climax sweet like death by chocolate. . . . our luscious dessert Written Jan. 26, 2012 for Francine Robert's Romantic Senryu Contest Poetry Contest

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Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 9/24/2013 9:49:00 PM

Who could pass up a Valentine like that. That's one sexy poem.

Samual Ronthorpe

Date: 2/4/2012 12:38:00 AM

Wow. I seriously considered entering my poem "Valentine Quest" in this contest instead. I made a good decision, cause this would have definitely beat mine. And that last stanza, all I can say it is, that's one of the hottest and most well written stanza I have ever read on that subject. I am not going to wish you luck on your contest. This write needs no luck, it is a winner all on it's own. It takes talent to master the shorter forms of poetry and you have it. Well Done. S.Ronthorpe

Samual Ronthorpe
Date: 2/4/2012 12:47:00 AM

Obviously I didn't know the contest was over and it was a winner....."egg on my face". I seriously didn't know the contest was judged. My comments still stand, I was just a bit behind, it's a flaw. In the words of a famous congressman "I am not a perfect man" :-}

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/2/2012 10:48:00 PM

Wow....Psssssst...Hot. Loved it.

Robert Johnson

Date: 1/31/2012 3:45:00 PM

We drank all night in love's delight. And acted like two fools. I gazed into your lovely eyes just like two lapis pools. The morning came to end our shame. And reality's whip was bound to tame. But everytime I think of it, my mouth just always drools.

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 1/31/2012 7:34:00 AM

very original...had me breathing hard...lol.congrats. BG

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/30/2012 9:16:00 PM

rounds of cheers to you andie for the fantastic win.. beautifullly delish!..:) hugggs!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/30/2012 9:03:00 PM

congrats Andrea on a fantastic win for precious words ..luv that title too..my friend..

Gwendolen Song

Date: 1/30/2012 6:00:00 PM

High calorie lovin', Andrea! You live on the edge with this sweet delicatessen. Congrats again...and again. Your poetry rocks! Gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 1/30/2012 2:31:00 PM

I don't know how you could have gotten steamier! Congrad's on your win! Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/30/2012 11:43:00 AM

Ah, what a great combination. Food and romance! Delicious entry, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Francine's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/30/2012 11:29:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning placement in Francine's contest Andrea. Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/30/2012 11:20:00 AM

congrats on your 5th place win Andrea with this delicious entry

John Loving Iii

Date: 1/28/2012 3:17:00 PM

A delicious ending.

Jack Horne

Date: 1/28/2012 1:06:00 PM

Wow, this would be some dinner to remember! Awesome piece

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/28/2012 12:07:00 PM

This write is chock o block with like" a sweet taste throughout the words you've scribed here Andrea..!

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/28/2012 12:05:00 PM

Hi! my sweet friend, do you tell how you dream? Please, tell me the magic. Loved this wonderful climax, bl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 1/28/2012 6:10:00 AM

This a warm write with burning passion.... I love it.... Catching up little by little...lol... My town is decent size and has three villiages surriunding it with White Plains, Yonkers and New Rochelle cities all close by... Today is my signing, wishing all my soup friends could be here ...luv u Michael

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/27/2012 8:16:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your amazing poetry this morning Andrea. This week has flown by for me. I hope you enjoy your weekend and find the inspiration to write some more during this time. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/27/2012 7:06:00 AM

Reads like a winner and a TV add for Red Lobster or Olive Garden..Enjoyed..Good luck in the contest..Excellent choice of dessert..The form of my last entry is called a Triquint..I think someone made it up but not sure..It was not easy to write and I am not sure if I did it correctly..Just type it in your search engine and you should find out how it is put together..It is three stanzas of five lines each..The count is 9, 7, 5, 3, 1..Rhyme is a,a,a,a,b..carries over to each stanza.Sara

Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/27/2012 7:07:00 AM

Someone wrote a contest entry using this form..I thought that I would look it up..I was challenged to try it..I probably needed a handicap to write it though...Sara

Dalila Agtani

Date: 1/27/2012 3:17:00 AM

Yes, I'm following the 3-course meal Andrea! Appetizer, main course, dessert... The dessert is the climax!! Thank you for all your comments on my works. You have encouraged me to do better. Love Dalila

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 1/26/2012 11:50:00 PM

Nice romantic one Andrea. Best wishes for contest. Thanks for comments on my poem....yeah, my sons are caring....Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 1/26/2012 11:12:00 PM

Oh, my..what a treat Andea, you are reaching unimaginable heights..i like the sheer poetry of the last stanza..i dont think there could be a better description of that feeling, jag

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/26/2012 10:44:00 PM

oi! lol... Nathan, better have one of these main romantic course for us... naughty you.. good luck in the contest,... Enjoyed stopping by tonight, have yourself a wonderful Friday! ;-) always,..pd

Judy Ball

Date: 1/26/2012 10:28:00 PM

Sounds pretty yummy my friend. People should enjoy more meals like that. God Bless, JB

Erich Goller

Date: 1/26/2012 9:49:00 PM

That a very romantic 3 meal course with sweet dessert... thanks for sharing it. God bless you.Hugs!Erich