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A Time For All Things - Visual Number 3

I came to the fields in the morning to drink in their essence Ruby skies reflected their glory and whispered "this will not last, For there is a time for all things, drink deep now while you can"..

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Skat A

Date: 2/15/2015 10:49:00 PM

Barbara, Awesome take, Congrats in Andrea's Sijo contest. -- SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 2/11/2015 1:36:00 AM

What a beauty Barbara u hv created wid this awesome write! congrats on big win!

Joseph May

Date: 2/9/2015 10:41:00 PM

Beautiful write Congrats on your win

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/9/2015 3:00:00 PM

Ahh!! Great quality poetry!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/8/2015 5:51:00 PM

Congratulations on your nice win in the Sijo contest, Barbara. You present a nice portrait for Visual 3, and I love the last line in response to "this will not last!" Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 2/8/2015 2:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx

Michael Miers

Date: 2/8/2015 12:18:00 PM

one must have drunk deep the 'pierian spring' to express something so imbued with eternal music. this piece has an electric feel.

Frederic Parker

Date: 2/8/2015 11:00:00 AM

congratulations on this very philosophical poem that expresses wisdom

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/8/2015 8:28:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/8/2015 5:33:00 AM

It seems great beauty is always fleeting. You chose the same lovely picture as I did Barbara. Congratulations on your wonderful placement with this winning gem!

Barbara Gorelick
Date: 2/8/2015 10:40:00 AM