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a tear

a tear i shed is more than enough. ennough to say, no shout "IM SAD" 
enough to scream "IM MORE THAN MAD" 
and i hate to cry. especialy in public. 
it draws attention and that's not me. so when i cry i pray that nobody sees.
 i'll fold my hands over my eyes curled up in a ball and to noones supprise,
 ill be surrounded by the pond ive made , 
covered with smeared mascre, smeared down my wet cheeks,
 with a box of tissues by my side 
and a memory in my mind, 
ill cry to say one last time 
for this is the beginning of my fight.

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  1. Date: 6/5/2013 9:10:00 PM
    A nice and late welcome to the soup... thank you for the soup mail. i will go and read your latest poem... Linda

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 8:48:00 AM
    good work i like it,

    jones Avatar carson jones
    Date: 3/26/2013 10:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    thank you fred
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:26:00 AM
    My dear, Carson, what a human-too-human poem! It I a parade of emotions battling the inner and outer Self at once! Crying is not to be seen as weakness of A person but rather as strength of his humanity! You seem To be a fine young woman that a few tears will add to the Beauty of your soul! Thank you for your visit and a warm welcome to the SOUPERS! Plus a 7!

    jones Avatar carson jones
    Date: 7/9/2013 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    It's a late reply, but this is a comment that I've found so inspiring. Thank you deeply Demitrios.
  1. Date: 3/7/2013 9:25:00 AM
    Carson Jones, a sad feeling and poem, when it comes to tears... hope you win the fight... always~ LINDA