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A Summer Couplet

~~ My dappled, spotted horses are running free and wild, on a day full of summer breezy wind, they prance, dance and glide. ~~ June 14, 2013 Couplet For the contest, A Summer Couplet

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  1. Date: 7/7/2013 10:58:00 AM
    loving your summer couplet :-) CONGRATULATIONS -in Andrea, contest!!! Take Care *xox* Linda

  1. Date: 7/2/2013 12:46:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Your horses are taking advantage a fun day of sunshine...Sara

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 2:58:00 PM
    This reminded me of my 1 day on a horse farm! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/30/2013 5:06:00 AM
    One of my fav sights, horses galloping freely having fun. Congrats. Rick

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:24:00 PM
    Constance. Congratulations in Andrea's steaming hot summer couplet contest... what else could we ask for -the constant reminder of the hottest season that wonders through my Texas Sky. <3<3<3 ~SKAT~"

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:41:00 PM
    Love this Constance!Congratulations on your win.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 1:33:00 PM
    As always, you paint the page with beauty!! You know I am also a girl who loves horses!! (I remember your first photos on the Soup, with your horse)..lovely !!

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 9:02:00 AM
    I think you must really love horses, Constance. This was beautiful and would have scored even higher with rhyme. next time I need to say rhyming couplets and make it clearer. Thanks for supporting my contest. I can always expect a beautiful poem from you.

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 8:24:00 AM
    Pretty picture..congrats me dear. BG

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 7:49:00 AM
    What happy scene this is--summer fun! Congrats Constance

  1. Date: 6/29/2013 3:54:00 AM
    Such a dazzling picture you paint with so few strokes of your pen.... Your win is well deserved..... Hugs.... Jake

  1. Date: 6/15/2013 11:02:00 AM
    beautiful write, my friend. Thanks - loved the contest and I see you have another! Will put my thinking cap on - tanka poems are my stumbling block

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:28:00 PM
    I could feel summer! I didn't see the summer part [for the couplet contest so mine didn't even get an HM.] oh well! Nice to hear from you Constance hope you are well! Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 1:21:00 PM
    You've done your horses poetic justice dear Lady, well done xxx

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 11:14:00 AM
    I used to love horse riding, we would let them have their head on the beach, magnificent, brought back bitter sweet memories xx

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 10:18:00 AM
    What imagery you have painted with your awesome words in this delightful write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this afternoon! What a lovely piece, such a magnificent poem, Great work!!

  1. Date: 6/14/2013 9:29:00 AM
    Nothing is more beautiful than horses running free, the color of the horses is piebald(black and white spots) but it did not fit in the couplet so I wrote dappled and spotted instead. Constance