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What You Felt In That Moment

deeper-day-dreaming. was he not a confident lover? disheveled-darning-dominant. confidence is not letting what may be disheveled in you get so deep that it dominates so by day, be daring. dream. he transformed into all she needed. he was all she needed. cliched or not, it all happened for them overnight. he made his great-grandparents proud after explaining "what you felt in that moment"

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Date: 7/28/2016 7:17:00 PM
Deep poem, Chante, very vivid writing of that moment on subject. Enjoyable overall. Check out some my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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Chante Reeves
Date: 8/7/2016 9:15:00 PM
thank you so much! sorry for the late response! =)
Date: 6/6/2016 5:43:00 AM
A well-thought piece this one is... thanks for sharing.
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Chante Reeves
Date: 8/7/2016 9:16:00 PM
thank you so much! sorry for the late response!
Date: 5/29/2016 4:42:00 AM
A deep poem, Chante...conjures up all manner of scenarios! My very best regards. :) john P.s A seven..
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Chante Reeves
Date: 8/7/2016 9:16:00 PM
thank you!!

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