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A Stone In the Cold - 6

Ahead, the bear in sudden motion stands. With a surge of strength, I turn unstayed by fear, a welling force inside to take command. A grim rivalry, but respect we share, yet, uncontrolled the bear imperious roars. With enraged might, he swings his bloody head. His pain in a thundering bellow soars. Off into the dense forest, he has fled. I slip haphazard through death's devious plan, and kneel in the damp crimson covered ground with survival hard-won by these two hands. I rise to face night as darkness surrounds. The wild's full of creatures, stealthy and bold I must build a shelter, to fight the cold.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 3/16/2014 6:04:00 PM
Beautiful and great piece of work from a talented poet..Congrats on your superb win...
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Date: 3/15/2014 10:13:00 AM
Way to go..Great work..Sara
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Date: 3/15/2014 1:58:00 AM
Congratulations on the fine with beautiful sonnet, carrie
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Date: 2/11/2014 2:12:00 PM
An excellent write sweet sweet Carrie which makes me yearn for comfort and shelter!!!
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Date: 2/11/2014 1:11:00 AM
Great write Carrie! 'death's devious plan' - now that's one plan we would all NOT want to be recipients of! I like how you said 'build a shelter, to fight the cold' - it shows active participation in correcting a dire situation. Very well penned!
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Date: 2/11/2014 12:56:00 AM
Damn, gripping lines!! This was very intense work! =D
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Date: 2/10/2014 9:50:00 PM
An early congratulations to you here, Carrie!! The wording of your sonnet is magnificent.
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Date: 2/10/2014 7:24:00 PM
I really enjoyed this Carrie. It paints a vivid picture...Tim
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