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A Spontaneous Reaction

I love your smile all the more when it's not practiced but tugs the corners of your lips as a spontaneous reaction to my presence for it immediately solicits a genuine smile of my own in return. (Fibonacci) 3/9/2015

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Date: 3/17/2018 1:37:00 PM
So very sweet - the combination of the form and the subtlety of the object of scrutiny. Lovely, Emile.
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Date: 3/17/2018 1:41:00 PM
Thanks Line, your comments are most welcomed my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/21/2015 5:58:00 PM
Emile:) Thank you so much for the reply. That was nice of you to comment my comment. ((Regarding the reply you left in my comment box)) Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/20/2015 10:48:00 PM
Emile, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/21/2015 9:16:00 AM
Thank you so much, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/18/2015 9:04:00 AM
Ahh!! How nice..I hope that you shared this one with the one that you love..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 3/18/2015 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate all your support. Emile.
Date: 3/17/2015 5:46:00 PM
This was so sweet! It made me smile as I read it. Congrats on your win, Emile! Love, Kim
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:02:00 PM
Thanks so much Kim, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 3/15/2015 11:48:00 PM
EMILE, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.
Date: 3/15/2015 11:33:00 AM
Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.
Date: 3/15/2015 1:06:00 AM
Ah wonderful ! Big congrats on ur win Emile!
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:09:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.
Date: 3/14/2015 8:45:00 PM
what a lovely poem Emile - made me smile reading it - congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.
Date: 3/14/2015 8:20:00 PM
unique thought, Emile. It is hard to imitate a true smile, they are so personal between two people. Congrats on your placement.
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Date: 3/16/2015 8:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for this vote of confidence and encouragement.
Date: 3/10/2015 4:08:00 AM
I love the Fibonacci slant in this poem Emile and the clever link to genuine emotion. Brilliant.... :)
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:01:00 AM
Thanks David, I enjoy hearing from you. Emile.
Date: 3/9/2015 11:25:00 PM
:) Romantically sweet and delicious
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Date: 3/10/2015 9:03:00 AM
Eileen, is that a comment on yourself or my poem? Both are equally true, thanks. Emile.
Date: 3/9/2015 8:04:00 PM
so true, I wish you would put a photo up so I can see YOUR smile, I let you see mine! Light & Love
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:01:00 PM
Ah Debbie, some things are best imagined, thanks. Emile.
Date: 3/9/2015 6:15:00 PM
this is wonderful, 'Emile. I see many people are catching on to that form now!!(it's basically a reversed etheree with a few of the lines different syllables)
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:04:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, it's not as hard as it looks, give it a try. Emile.
Date: 3/9/2015 5:55:00 PM
Love the message of your poem, Emile! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 3/9/2015 9:05:00 PM
Thanks Laura, your visits are always a treat. Emile.

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