A Sparrow's Night

Ageless voices carried beneath swift wings,
as darkness falls upon the midnight sparrow...

Countless songs envelop her wings,
as she soars the depths of her paradise...

Boundless senses echo in the shadows,
as she glides on the waves of her ancestry...

Whistling winds drive her into endless heights,
as she drinks in the flavor of a sparrow's night...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 6/4/2013 10:19:00 PM
Angela. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda
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Date: 5/25/2013 12:09:00 PM
Angela, i hope you figure out the site. welcome to the soup~SKAT~
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Date: 5/25/2013 10:02:00 AM
I"m tryin to figure out how to edit my poem because I noticed a mistake. It's supposed to be Countless songs envelop her spirit, instead of envelop her wings...
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Angela Petrausch
Date: 5/25/2013 10:05:00 AM
Oh and thank you everyone for reading and for what you said! hugs
Date: 5/25/2013 3:56:00 AM
This was a beautiful read. Keep posting.. you have talent.
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:44:00 AM
- Lovely described, Angela! - Welcome to P-Soup - Have fun with poetry! - Have a great weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:27:00 AM
So much creative ink flowing from a talented pen is welcome here in the Soup. I believe you can develop a substantial following as you post more of your work.... Just Know we love you.... Jake
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:23:00 AM
Tremendous setting & atmosphere. I was feeling that flight as I read this. Excellent job!
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Date: 5/24/2013 10:13:00 AM
Beautifuly done. Welcome to PoetrySoup. Click on our names and pictures to read and leave comments. Leaving comments will give others a trail to follow back to your work... to read. Those online... are always a good start... That's how I found you.
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