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A Soft, Cool Blue

Into two pools of a soft, cool blue My soul dares to take a dive The mistress whose orbs my heart subdues Is a shipwreck I can’t survive My knees grow weak, my palms do sweat In my stomach flutter butterflies Her eyes entranced when first we met My cause is lost you realize Into two pools of a soft, cool blue My freedoms are sure to drown But a heart unbroken is a heart turned cruel To dive and perish, is better, I’ve found

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/19/2012 10:48:00 AM
Cool line [But a heart unbroken is a heart turned cruel] Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2012 2:01:00 AM
Joe, another congrats for this excellent write...David
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Date: 8/18/2012 11:54:00 AM
Tremendous write. Very deep yet beautiful. Haunting. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 8/17/2012 11:17:00 AM
wow, one of your best romantic poems EVER. Congratulations, Joe. I love this one.
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Date: 8/17/2012 5:57:00 AM
Very nice... congratulations on your win... Terry
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Date: 8/17/2012 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your splendid win in Brian's "#197" contest Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2012 2:48:00 AM
Joe, congrats on your win, loved this first time...David
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Date: 8/13/2012 5:17:00 PM
Romantic and wise... I like the messages you send.
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Date: 8/13/2012 7:33:00 AM
How romantic is this... excellent xx
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Date: 8/13/2012 6:23:00 AM
Joe, love this very romantic write..David
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