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A Silent Weeping

~ I lay in repose, in calmness and quietness, Silence and stillness, words unspoken; Only the flutter of my heart and breath, As still as a photograph, lost in my thoughts. ~ And in my solitude, I dream silent dreams ~ I dream, I go riding a black horse, A cloud of dark shadows is my hair; I wear a deep green velvet coat, And the snow is falling, falling, falling. ~ And in my stillness, I dream silent dreams ~ A thousand soft petals fall and scatter, Beautiful red roses twirling, swirling; They descend fair and calm and silent, Laying on the pure snow covered ground. ~ And in my obliviousness, I dream silent dreams ~ My soul dwells up above the clouds, The turmoil of my life forgotten; I am voiceless and at peace with life, Listen, is that my silent weeping. ~ And I lament, that I must depart my dreams ~ ______________________________ December 7, 2012 Lyric Submitted to the contest, Enter A Poem I Have Not Commented On Sponsor, A Poet Destroyer First Place

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  1. Date: 4/4/2015 1:29:00 AM
    Great and wonderfully crafted, Broken. Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/24/2015 4:46:00 PM
    Such a lovely poem, Broken. Very relaxing and soulful. A heartfelt congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandra

  1. Date: 3/22/2015 10:44:00 PM
    BROKEN, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 8:14:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/9/2012 7:35:00 AM
    love this beautiful write, my friend. I hope you are feeling much stronger x

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 11:34:00 AM
    Amazing!!! Love coming across writes like this one...hugs Michael

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 10:38:00 AM
    So beautiful!

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 8:45:00 AM
    intense and powerful......dream,dream,dream.dreams transform into thoughts and thoughts into actions.....great write here... Mehnaz

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:41:00 AM
    What a gorgeous poem, your writing relaxes me. This is a precious pearl.

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 5:50:00 AM
    Beautiful write quite soulful..touchingly emotional. love the way you pen your poetry. quite exquisite.

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 11:15:00 PM
    ah I have surely missed the poems of horses you wrote of in past poems and this brand new one is both intense and electrifying Constance .. I don't like waking up from good dreams luv or beautiful ones either..

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 8:22:00 PM
    Beautiful poem you have weaved Constance, glad I stopped in to read, have a nice weekend, xxxx Rose

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:28:00 PM
    Those dreams are what perfect dreams are made of! You have painted illustrious ideas and brilliance into the minds eye! I really enjoyed reading this wondrous and remarkable poem this evening! What a promising piece, Great Work!!

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:47:00 PM
    The comparision of life to a still photo is very affective! Do you remember when black & white photo's were watercolored in? That's a good intro for a Dear Heart poem! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 1:46:00 PM
    Hi Constance yes I like this, dreams are wonderful, all the best Owen