A Season's Dance

She wanted me to dance, to dance away It was the spring, within the month of May Still to this day I can see her movements We went around in circles, made statements Sun was filtered down from heaven above Warming the ground and flowers with a shove Letting things bloom is the dance we both shared Gorgeous moment, as one showing we cared Then we slipped into the summer’s proud dance Heat masterfully expresses the prance Around I spin you, and you delve in me I feel a piece of you in summer breeze Here again flowers run abundantly They enjoy the storms as those flow freely We danced throughout the summer with some sweat Proudly showing we danced, best as of yet And now the dance blows quickly into dusk Colors shows beauty like our dance-like musk Leaves shower down onto our very steps We dance into the warmth of the doorsteps Glowing around from the cool sunsets here Things slow down and don’t burn up like with fear She showed me her dancing moves with romance Awesome feelings come from our swinging dance I spin her around in the winter’s grace I clasp her tight as the snow falls in place Whiteness covers the ground and life ceases Leaving beauty from death and its pieces The air looks stale and stagnant with a bite Showing blossoms of winter blooms alright We danced with a deep feeling in this time Frozen was our breath, but warm our sublime She steps it off, and returns back to spring Feeling the warmth back onto her gold ring After a year of seasons we return To the start of real beauty to discern
Russell Sivey Contest: A Season's Dance Sponsor: Gail Angel Doyle 9/27/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 10/23/2013 1:17:00 PM
Hi Russell, lovely win.. LOVE --SKAT
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Date: 10/22/2013 10:06:00 PM
Hello Russell, , a wonderful win in Gail's "Season's Dance " contest.... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 10/21/2013 12:58:00 PM
A beautiful dance, Russell! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 10/20/2013 11:04:00 AM
Enjoyed the feel of rhapsody in this. Favorite line "Frozen was our breath, but warm our sublime". Congrats on the well deserved win :)
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Date: 10/20/2013 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful and lovely piece,Russel..Nice going..Congrats on your superb win in this contest....
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:50:00 AM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:48:00 PM
You made this a personal observation of your own romance. Very nice. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:42:00 PM
so many wonderful lines in this gorgeous poem of yours....congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/30/2013 7:36:00 AM
The dance of all seasons was well-celebrated in your excellent masterpiece my dear friend Russell. It gave me a dreamy feeling to experience the beauty of their dance someday...hope so... that's in another place not here.;))) So sad, we've only two seasons here. Again, thank you so much for sharing. Good luck always! Thank you, thank u so much again. love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 9/28/2013 2:55:00 PM
- A really beautiful poem Russell ... the most beautiful thing I've read in a long time ... Thank you, dear friend! - Have a relaxed and happy weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2013 1:17:00 PM
Great poem by you Russell !Enjoyed the read.Thanks for visiting my poem page.
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Date: 9/28/2013 8:43:00 AM
You have mastered the use of similies and metaphors in the well penned poem, Russell
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Date: 9/28/2013 7:18:00 AM
Reads like a winner ...Way to go..Winter is slowly coming to visit...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 9/28/2013 6:09:00 AM
Dance: provocateur of hearts, tester of wills, matchmaker of souls. How could any mortal resist its temptations? Excellent work!
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Date: 9/28/2013 5:09:00 AM
effervescent in tone and substance...this makes want to swing along the glide of a dance, russel.. what an awesome piece; incredible as always!..:) huggs
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