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A Sad Good-Bye

You turned and walked away shoulders slumped, eyes downcast, the morning air was still; bright sun crept through the slats of window's crooked shades like the eye lids of dawn. Like the eye lids of dawn I saw your tears falling, wanting to touch your face it was too late you had closed the door on our love. 12:11 a.m. Feb. 19, 2011 C. Alvez

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Date: 8/22/2012 5:00:00 PM
My Interpertation, I'm sure is different.. Right On!! It's obvious why you're my only fave so far.. No disrespect to any others.. Pen on.. TC: Thats funny, the validate letters are TERR, maybe ive drank too much... LOL My name is terry.. HA!!!
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Date: 8/8/2012 9:51:00 PM
thats so sad... and beautiful.
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Cynthia Alvez
Date: 8/9/2012 6:16:00 AM
Skyler, Thank you so much for your commet! C. Alvez

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