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A Rusted Key

A rusted key has broken --- It's trapped inside a lock --- Because the metal of it's being, has simply lost it's stock --- No amount of blasphemy or acting quite demented --- Will repair this fractured relic --- Any more then the hypocrite, who prays to be repented.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 4/8/2013 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations Sheol(interseting name) on your winning spot xx
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Date: 4/7/2013 6:29:00 PM
I super love this Sheol, love the relic you made of age... , you did well in Susan's "AGING" contest. Congratulations:-) take care~LINDA
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Date: 4/7/2013 3:31:00 PM
A different take on the contest an honorable win. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/7/2013 1:24:00 PM
So so true , nice analogy great write.
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Date: 10/13/2010 1:37:00 PM
straight forward and striking force
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Date: 7/25/2010 5:59:00 AM
Saw this tittle had to read one more, On this all i will say you are good with comparing life situations with a strange and enjoyable metaphoric way,,,cool,, have a nice day,..p.d.
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Date: 2/12/2010 1:37:00 PM
Quite a profound message, Sheol. Like the way you compared the "rusted key" to the hypocrite. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/5/2010 5:37:00 PM
wow good one and so true!!! Light & Love
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Date: 2/5/2010 7:17:00 AM
Great thought in this one, Sheol! It's kind of rhymed too! Have a nice day! andrea
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