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A Proposal of Sorts

marry me because i'd like to wake up in OUR bed i'd like to go to OUR church in OUR car i'd like to celebrate with OUR children all the special days of the year and i'd like to have OUR aniversary here i am with everything i own that i would like to be OURS in a house, in a heart in a hopefull future but the only thing missing is a past and words like we, us and them i don't want to suffice with just being him

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/5/2012 12:32:00 PM
YES, it is hard to be alone so the word -our-makes life complete. love phyl
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Date: 3/31/2012 4:34:00 PM
Yes, I'm here and still love to read this and you have a soup mail.
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Date: 3/24/2012 9:20:00 AM
this is different, John, and enjoyable to read. harry
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Date: 3/24/2012 12:25:00 AM
Nicely written, I hope your dream comes true! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Caroline.
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Date: 3/22/2012 3:15:00 PM
Very inventive stuff, John. How could a prospective mate resist this proposal, which covers yesterday, today and tomorrow in such a charming way. Love, daver
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Date: 3/18/2012 8:45:00 PM
John, nice,,, to want and have someone always..God Bless,,.. have yourself a good night~ always*PD
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Date: 3/18/2012 6:42:00 PM
The resonance of this write is quite vivid. Enjoyed your poem poet
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Date: 3/18/2012 2:58:00 PM
I feel your longing John; sometimes patience isn't enough, the need is now and when it isn't forthcoming, there is pain. Love yourself in the meantime as you are special! :)
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Date: 3/18/2012 7:06:00 AM
Super cute!! A wonderful write, John
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