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sun deep down to sea moon behind heavy dark clouds.... stars astray unseen snowstorm prediction reaching home before snowing dream warm recesses keep light driving darkness unlock door refreshing air ========================= Ninth Place win in: Contest: Love Talks sponsored by deborah Guzzi

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Dr. Ram in Debbie Guzzi's contest "Love Talks". Love, Carol

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/14/2011 5:13:00 AM

Congratulations Dr. Ram on your 9th place win in Debbie's contest ;)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/13/2011 9:20:00 PM

The last line is great, and an overall effect of the whole write. Warm Congrats.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:02:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in Deb's contest. Doctor, this is a fine pairing of haku and tanka. A good read.

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:04:00 PM

Congratulations Dr Ram, it is wonderful to see you at the top with this worthy honor in ninth place win, Agaape, Moses

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/13/2011 12:36:00 PM

Lovely Dr Ram..Congrats to you. BG

Kash Poet

Date: 3/12/2011 8:22:00 PM

Congrats Dr Mehta on your win in the contest--kashinath

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/12/2011 7:31:00 PM

Congrats Dr. Ram on your super win in Love Talks contest with this awesome dialogue between two lovers..luv.. enjoy another wonderful win in top ten ..my friend..