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A Perfect-

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A Perfect-

A perfect crime.
The paper the victim,
the weapon a pen.

A perfect time.
The thoughts in my head,
a prayer, I say, amen.

A perfect day.
The mood is right,
it is time to begin.

A perfect way.
So I write, Father please,
forgive me for my sin.

A perfect start.
The liquid poison,
slowly kills the page.

A perfect heart.
Slowly breaking,
from all the rage.

A perfect death.
Please go in peace,
Your soul to keep.

A perfect breath.
For it's the last,
please don't weep.

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  1. Date: 1/1/2014 5:37:00 PM
    it's not what I usuaky read when I read elegy poems but it's there. nice one

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 10:14:00 PM
    STEPHANIE, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-). Have yourself a good one. Always~ LINDA

  1. Date: 4/4/2013 11:25:00 AM
    what can one say, just perfect!, lovely write, well done.. Gordon

  1. Date: 4/3/2013 3:39:00 AM
    And HE will answer anyone who can ask like that... beautiful! very well done... Ami.

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 2:43:00 PM
    Welcome Stephanie !!! You are sure to be loved here on Soup!! Excellent poetry!!! Hugs Michael. Ps love the last name :•)

  1. Date: 3/28/2013 12:32:00 PM
    Perfect poem to start with! - Well done, Stephanie! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

    Lynne Avatar Nie Nie Lynne
    Date: 3/28/2013 10:08:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks!
  1. Date: 3/28/2013 5:00:00 AM
    Wow! Stephanie this is great! Welcome to the Soup. Rick

    Lynne Avatar Nie Nie Lynne
    Date: 3/28/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you.
  1. Date: 3/27/2013 6:18:00 PM
    I love your poem! Welcome to the Soup, keep writing! :)

    Lynne Avatar Nie Nie Lynne
    Date: 3/28/2013 10:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks! Keep writing I shall :)