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A Past To Come,,,A Past Never To Come!!!!!

Even if present should be thought of Even if work & life is in our present At times nostalgic arrives in life Which is running off to secure future Past however bad or beautiful it is, It's video never becomes dead. Specially the childhood, innocent In which our smile makes world smile So beautiful! So shining! Our chirping wakes house Our speech touches heart Our eyes innocent to take Our nature imitating world The best time never to come But one's sad days, one hardly remember The days when everything went wrong The days when relations become emotional The days in which our thought deny Our future never thought of! Family problem never thought of! God why those days strike through! In life full of helping nature Still the cycle runs periodically It should be, but it hurts!!! by:- Vrushani Thaker

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Date: 12/17/2010 10:52:00 AM
and we spread our wings and fly if they are dry enough.... This being my first poem read here on ps I probably should have waited before commenting but i oh well ill just say ...delightful work and that i look forward to reading more poems here when I come up for air from the xmas rush
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:47:00 PM
very profound, and very true in what you express here, enjoyed this poem. Harry
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Date: 9/29/2010 1:39:00 PM
When relations becomingemotional.. nice expression. yes the cycle goes on eternally, Vrushani
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:16:00 PM
I am happy to be able to sit and read all the diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad your poetry was among the ones I am reading today Vrushani. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:15:00 PM
Nice thoughts you have penned here, Vrushani:) Enjoyed reading your poem. Emilia
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Date: 9/29/2010 12:00:00 PM
nice...i think it's interesting how the procession goes, subtly through, and yet it still is a cycle...there's something awesome about realising the cyclical. Good poem
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