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A Passing of Pomegranates - For Contest

A Passing of Pomegranates Outside the city where the pomegranates grow, he sits with his beads and chants - quiet drone lost in the history of so long ago bathed in the scent of trees red crusted dome. Walks the same paths his ancestors trod wanders beneath the trees they once planted wonders what happened to nations – and Gods longs for her hand and the wishes joy granted. Stops for a moment to challenge the sky curses its depth – its foreverdeep cold longs to discover the tears yet to cry outside the city where the pomegranates grow. 4/5/2016 submitted to – A First Line Prompt – Poetry Contest sponsor – Julia Ward

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Date: 4/10/2016 9:04:00 PM
Beautiful writing!!
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John Lawless
Date: 4/29/2016 9:28:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, this one got lost in the hustle of spring and granddaughter duty.
Date: 4/5/2016 3:02:00 PM
Excellent imagery and flow in your fine poem, John! I really enjoyed this one :)
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John Lawless
Date: 4/29/2016 9:27:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I apologize for taking so long to acknowledge your comment.
Date: 4/5/2016 2:40:00 PM
I like it. A story in a poem, good luck in the contest.
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John Lawless
Date: 4/29/2016 9:26:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by DM, I'm running a bit behind in my responses

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