Home » Poems » Jack Horne » A Park Bench

A Park Bench

a teddy bear 
lies on a bench in the park - -
a little boy cries

For Susan’s Bench contest

childhoodhaiku

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Danesh Morgan

Date: 8/22/2013 6:34:00 PM

dnt need to be Einstein to know why! good luck and its very good

Skat A

Date: 5/1/2013 3:09:00 PM

i like the tender feel of the haiku~ SKAT

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 4/3/2013 12:53:00 PM

So few words convey so much....very moving. Congrats on o super win! Hugs

Audrey Haick

Date: 4/1/2013 12:32:00 AM

: ) It had to be on the Winners' List, JM! Congratulations on an awesome win! xx Annalise

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 3/31/2013 11:32:00 AM

So cute on this haiku. Wishing you a very Happy Easter. love phyl

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/29/2013 5:29:00 PM

Great winner...Congrats ..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/29/2013 4:50:00 PM

awwww, this sweet one got a GREAT rating, Jack. BIG congrats to you.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/28/2013 10:13:00 PM

Jack, I'm stopping by to say hi, and wish you an early Happy Easter, just in case I don't have time to stop by in the next few days. take care and have yourself a good one~ Always & Forever *LINDA"

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/28/2013 3:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Jack, poor little boy xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/27/2013 7:58:00 PM

Short and sweet..I love these short forms. Congrats on your win. BG

Donna Jones

Date: 3/27/2013 5:00:00 PM

Awesome Jack...well deserved win...Donna

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/27/2013 1:19:00 PM

A well drawn picture with few words. LCongratulations on your big win, Jack. Love, Joyce

Heather Ober

Date: 3/27/2013 12:23:00 PM

Awesome win, Jack! :)

Kathryn Collins

Date: 3/25/2013 7:37:00 AM

Jack - How touching. And don't we know a new bear won't do. love Kathy

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/18/2013 2:43:00 PM

Ilene is right. this is a very touching one. Way to do the contest for susan!! Wish you had more here for me to see. Thanks for reading all my new posts up this past week. LUv, Andrea

Ilene Bauer

Date: 3/17/2013 3:57:00 PM

very touching...

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/17/2013 2:04:00 PM

awh and I cry for him, find him and take it back Jack ... love it and many thanks xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/17/2013 1:48:00 PM

Awwww this is such a tender write my friend! You sure know how to pull at ones heartstrings don't you Jack? I really enjoyed reading this illustrious and very well put together Haiku this afternoon! What a brilliant piece, Great work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/17/2013 1:47:00 PM

Short but sweet..Reads like winning material to me..I have been running some ideas around..I may have waited too late..Thanks for the visits by my work..Sara

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/17/2013 1:14:00 PM

Awwh! There's that gentle heart of yours coming through, Jack. A winner, already. Always, Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/17/2013 1:13:00 PM

Poor little teddy bear and poor little boy, how will they now get to sleep at night ... so cute haiku Jack! - Luck in contest.- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)