A Most Delightful Season - the Trine Style

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~A Most Delightful Season~ (Trine) Outside the sun is showing so bright Spring always brings a lot of delight The children play in the park everyday And people everywhere look happier yea Birds bees and butterflies all happily fly Sunflowers and beautiful red roses make anyone sigh Spring brings to the eyes a most beautiful sight Wishing for spring never to go away but always stay Many folks sadden when they say to spring good-bye. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2011 March.12.2016

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Jeannie Cronin

Date: 3/12/2016 8:53:00 PM

Nice poem Dorian. Seems like you might have meant to use the word "too" vs. "to" in the second phrase, unless I am reading it wrong. Anyways, enjoyed the read. Hope you are having a great weekend.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/22/2016 1:05:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Jeannie,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.Very deeply appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you!:)D