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A Moment, Luminous

Tumbling, over the timeworn stones I'll fly in a kingdom of the winds Far from here, I am bathed by the moon, washed at midnight by radiant light I will soar, in the clarion dawn, free-falling over the edge of earth While cool mist, washed in splintered sunlight, lets me be a shadow of myself
_______________________________________________ 10/30/14 For Nette's Contest: Crystalline By Carrie Richards

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/30/2014 9:35:00 PM
simply gorgeous, CArrie. It got better and better as I read it!!!
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Date: 10/30/2014 7:52:00 PM
A hard form no room for elaboration? Go Carrie! Thanks for the nice comment on "joss sticks" and afternoon in Devi's skin was not pleasant. Light & Love
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Date: 10/30/2014 3:54:00 PM
absolutely stunning imagery Carrie - Nette will love this - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
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