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A Modern Woman's Plight

She wakens to the most ungodly ring tone- her husband's cell phone left there by her bed. And next, her damn alarm clock's blare is fed by noise of the neighbor’s lawn mower’s drone. At work, suppressing groans, she is a clone who answers e-mails, and with silent dread, takes clients' calls. Guff fills her pounding head; again and then again that ringing phone! Then finally she’s home. Ahhhh. . . . time to dine - except the children cannot break away from Face book - and the oldest starts to whine. Her hungry spouse then walks into the fray. Amidst it all, as if to underline her plight, that neighbor’s dog begins to bay! For Cyndi MacMillan's TIMELESS YET CONTEMPORARY, A SONNET THANG

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 11/15/2012 5:33:00 PM
yike that was one annoying day..Light & Love
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Date: 11/3/2012 8:47:00 AM
Sometimes you just have to turn off all the phones. I got tense reading this one, good job.
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Date: 10/22/2012 11:15:00 PM
Very much my everyday life, dear Andrea. Except for the dog: he is ours and not the neighbor's...Congratulations on your win and thank you so much for the comments on my work. Love, Hanitra
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Date: 10/20/2012 8:56:00 PM
This is a great and marvelous masterpiece! I hope I can write a sonnet someday, lol! In fact, I've read all the entries ahead and I've written my congratulatory comments first on Cyndi's blog. Well, my biggest and warmest congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Andrea! Cheers! love/hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 10/18/2012 5:08:00 PM
Oh the plight of the moderne woman. The world really shoves her around. Congratulaions on your win. Lvoe, Joyce
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Date: 10/18/2012 11:16:00 AM
Winner as I said it would be...Congrats..Sara
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Date: 10/18/2012 8:29:00 AM
WARM CONGRATS ANDREA ON A MARVELOUS WRITE AND WIN FOR THIS TOUGH CHALLENGE .. U ALWAYS SHINE WITH YOUR GREAT ENTRIES LUV ..
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Date: 10/18/2012 7:57:00 AM
A great cacaphony - such are our days with children. Congratulations on your great depiction.
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
congrats on a great win Andrea...
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Date: 10/18/2012 6:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your 5th place win in Cyndi's contest Andrea. Love, Carol XXXX
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Date: 10/9/2012 10:03:00 AM
Nicely done modern woman's plight in the form of sonnet. Good luck,loved always, bl
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Date: 10/5/2012 10:02:00 AM
Love this poem Andrea. Sounds like home . love phyl
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Date: 9/29/2012 12:57:00 PM
love this thoughtful sonnnet, Andrea. Hope you are having a good day x
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Date: 9/28/2012 6:38:00 AM
Hi, Andrea! This is an awesome entry! i love it! This is a winner for sure!Thanks for reading one of my old poems. In fact, that was my entry before and I think, that number 11/14 is meter or date, lol. Well, i have to end here. I just dropped by for you and PD before going to my choir practice tonight. My schedule is really hectic this week and next week. Take care and God bless you always!!!! love and hugs:) Leonora
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Date: 9/27/2012 2:20:00 PM
I remember this feeling when my children were younger, Now I do not have an alarm, nor do I answer the phone unless I want to. I feel liberated from what you have described so well. I think we might have a lot in common. I really like your poems and prosies.
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:46:00 PM
Hmmm ... times change... and I guess 'plights' also change... Good poem... Good luck in the contest... Terry (BTW: Thanks for the opinion and advice on 'travelling sage', Andrea! I've fixed it according to your inspiration... there is a difference in the intended meaning /difference between packed and unpacked ('unpacked' having a slightly more 'off-color' slant... But I have headed toward the improved 'flow/stress/etc)
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:13:00 PM
Why it's just all in a day's work, Andrea. Howsomever, you have my sympathy. About the Valley. The poem is strictly fantasy. I live in Saginaw, MI - last outpost of civilization. Never been to no such valley nohow. Love, daver
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Date: 9/27/2012 12:01:00 PM
Life goes on ..... Wish you luck in the contest Andrea. xoxo love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/27/2012 11:25:00 AM
Got the scenario correct in many a woman's life..Great one for the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by..Glad you like my haiku..Sara
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Date: 9/27/2012 8:43:00 AM
AN UTTERLY SPECTACULAR SONNET FITTING ALL ENCOMPASSED IN TODAY'S HECTIC WORLD .. EXCELLENT RHYME AND GOOD LUCK IN CONTEST .. IT DOES NOT GET ANY BETTER THAN THIS ONE FROM ANDREA QUEEN OF THE SONNET .. LUV
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Date: 9/27/2012 7:58:00 AM
Turn the bloody things off and stick your head under the pillow just for once... well at least think about it , loved your mail I am so with you xx
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Date: 9/27/2012 6:20:00 AM
Yes I understand this very well, I've experienced this myself some days my friend! This poem amazes me with all the things she went through, quite a few obstacles that inhibits her progression of happiness throughout the day and evening! What a wondrous write that you have written! Andrea, I really enjoyed this very incredible poem that I've read this morning! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 9/27/2012 5:58:00 AM
That's no way to start a day, it can't help but get worse. So grab yourself an aspirin and put it in your purse. When ire fills you to the bone because that ringing, ringing phone. Remember that your not alone, look around, there's another clone. As far as when you get back home. Well, I guess that's why you wrote this poem. Have a nicer day tomorrow Andrea. :)
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Date: 9/27/2012 2:30:00 AM
True.expressed sooo well one of the many plight's of MODERN women:)
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Date: 9/27/2012 1:41:00 AM
Good idea to do it in Italian Sonnet form.Best wishes to you.
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