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A Love Song, At Last

Rain, in the inner forests of your eyes The heart of flowers in your smile The misty watchtower is your lips The sigh of surge in your fingertips The rain flowing endlessly over my head My eyesight is hidden by the oozing of the rust recollections and nightmares I run to the day but the rain never stops on my accursed soul You close your eyes as if the winter closes its cold text The rhymes of babies toddles on the yard You are the spider web of sun rays i am the broken pieces of sun stone of the atlas I am walking through the life baring the cursed downpour over my wild brain endlessly, eternally When you look me with passion The wind unties its knot when you hum the lines of a love song the sea suddenly startles from the sleep the wind starts its journey Now the rain stops

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 1/1/2016 11:08:00 AM
Gopak, pleasure to read :) HAVE YOURSELF A HAPPY January 1st. ...... SKAT
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Date: 9/2/2008 3:55:00 PM
What a wonderful write your poem A Love Song, At Last is. No wonder it has been featured this week. Heartiest Congratulations. -Mohammad
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Date: 9/2/2008 7:50:00 AM
Congratulations on "A Love Song, At Last" being featured. Vince
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Date: 8/31/2008 5:48:00 PM
Very interesting style of writing - Congrats on being featured this week -Just loved the way this poem is laid out and flows so smoothly - God Bless
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Date: 8/31/2008 5:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/31/2008 5:42:00 PM
Interesting use of imagery in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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