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A Love Note Whispered

The words not written For he will never want them So they are whispered In the darkness of my mind A rose that will never bloom

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Date: 6/24/2013 6:13:00 PM

Very pretty Barbara. Worthy of no. 1. Congratulations. Love, joyce

Date: 6/23/2013 6:32:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Barbara an so deserving of its first place. many congrats. Elaine

Date: 6/23/2013 2:08:00 PM

languid live mark the beauty of this piece.. congrats on your win, BG..:) huggs

Date: 6/22/2013 5:32:00 PM

Poignant comes to my mind and I love those kind!!! BIG congrats, Barbara.

Date: 6/22/2013 5:06:00 PM

A wonderful tanka, so full of emotion. Congrats on your 1st place win, Barbara! Love, Kim

Date: 6/22/2013 4:33:00 PM

So sad, and so heart wrenching, Those who have felt this way, will know, and feel the emotion with which this poem speaks

Date: 6/22/2013 10:13:00 AM

Congrats, Barbara. This is a beautiful tanka....The last line.....how very sad...poignant! I'm faving this. :)

Date: 6/21/2013 4:25:00 PM

Barb absolutely excellent! The last line evokes an excellent mood of emotion that completes this tanka wonderfully. Warm Smiles, Connie

Date: 6/21/2013 2:40:00 PM

Very cleverly done, Barbara! A splendid TANKA with marvelous language. Best wishes, Keith

Date: 6/19/2013 7:04:00 AM

Beautiful but sad! A rose never a rose unless it blooms! Hope someone will make it bloom! Wonderful Tanka!

Date: 6/19/2013 4:00:00 AM

The beauty of your words adds to the graveness of the situation. Great write, Barbara... David

Date: 6/19/2013 1:08:00 AM

barbara,no conventional thinking.to be different is really great.I will follow your poems for your out of the box creativity.great!

Date: 6/18/2013 10:04:00 PM

This is so sad yet so beautiful in depth and meaning...Going to my favorites!!!

Date: 6/18/2013 9:25:00 PM

Ah this is so sad but really lovely Barbara...love,Deb