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A Love Note To My Dream Boat

come to me by night

when the world has gone to sleep

~in my bed I wait~

come blanket me with your love

rock me awake to passion.


For the 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(39) any theme any form' Poetry Contest

lovepassiontanka

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Wendy Rycroft

Date: 2/9/2016 11:25:00 AM

Congrats xxxx well done

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 2/8/2016 8:38:00 AM

As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Andrea on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS

Joseph May

Date: 2/8/2016 8:37:00 AM

Congrats on your win Andrea!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/6/2016 8:16:00 PM

Beautiful--so much said in the few words allowed in a tanka! Janice

Sandra Haight

Date: 2/6/2016 2:37:00 PM

Oh so beautifully romantic, and so much conveyed in this short Tanka form, Andrea. Congratulations on your top of the podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 2/6/2016 8:24:00 AM

Beautiful Tanka, Andrea! A very worthy winner! Congratulations on being placed first! // paul

Skat A

Date: 2/6/2016 6:16:00 AM

Andrea, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/6/2016 3:40:00 AM

Hi Andrea. Congrats for your awesome piece, and #1 placement in the contest! ;-)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 2:09:00 AM

PS, Andrea, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/6/2016 2:07:00 AM

Hi, Andrea, what a surprise, LOL, I'm congratulating all the latest contest. I spotted my daughters winning list. I knew Royal, was closing a contest early today. but, Dang!!! I had no idea she was going to finalize all the ones she had hanging in one night. LOL, I bet you are saying it's about time. Anyways, XOOL to see you on the top of her winning list. She has good taste that's all I have to say. Love LINDA

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 7/26/2013 6:07:00 AM

Dreamy stuff my friend.Hugs

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 7/17/2013 9:54:00 PM

I like this one. I am just heading to bed and tried to catch up on some comments Yes, I need this dream hunk to come to bed and rock it with passion. LOL. Nice one. love phyl

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 7/1/2013 6:04:00 PM

Wow! That was some love note. I liked it. Thanks for sharing and for thinking I have wisdom.God bless you. I am now getting better. I can now do little things for myself and that feels good..... Lucilla

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 PM

Oh no, I hadn't seen this one was up for congrats as well, where will it ever end lol. Mind you Petal, who would not want to receive a note like this. Lovely. Take care, Richard

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 PM

tender and so loving congrats Shadow x smiles

Heather Ober

Date: 6/24/2013 11:51:00 AM

I knew this would be a winner!! Congrats!

Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 6/24/2013 12:59:00 AM

Very lovely Tanka. Well done and Congrats. AO

Elaine George

Date: 6/23/2013 6:34:00 PM

Very sensual and lovely, dear Andrea. Many congrats on your top notch win. Elaine

Red Omara

Date: 6/23/2013 6:00:00 PM

That's a helluva lot of Tanka. Such a sensual thirty one syllables. - Red

Robert Johnson

Date: 6/23/2013 2:13:00 PM

A love note to my dreamboat just rings right off the page. May every night bring such delight no matter what your age.

Abdul Malik

Date: 6/23/2013 12:19:00 PM

Hey this is cool. Now I am beginning to envy the blanket!LOL

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 6/23/2013 1:21:00 AM

andrea I learnt one has to dare for the context .Great poets dare to give the best for the context.Let me atleast dare to comment few words. Sexy honey sexy. As shammi kapoor says Yahooo!