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A Love Note To My Dream Boat

come to me by night when the world has gone to sleep ~in my bed I wait~ come blanket me with your love rock me awake to passion. For the 'COMPLETELY YOUR CHOICE(39) any theme any form' Poetry Contest

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Date: 2/9/2016 11:25:00 AM
Congrats xxxx well done
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:38:00 AM
As the theme of the contest says, it really is all about love! Congratulations Andrea on your well-deserved win! :) -HANS
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Date: 2/8/2016 8:37:00 AM
Congrats on your win Andrea!
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:16:00 PM
Beautiful--so much said in the few words allowed in a tanka! Janice
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:37:00 PM
Oh so beautifully romantic, and so much conveyed in this short Tanka form, Andrea. Congratulations on your top of the podium win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 2/6/2016 8:24:00 AM
Beautiful Tanka, Andrea! A very worthy winner! Congratulations on being placed first! // paul
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Date: 2/6/2016 6:16:00 AM
Andrea, Stopped by to congratulate you on your awesome poem. **SKAT**
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Date: 2/6/2016 3:40:00 AM
Hi Andrea. Congrats for your awesome piece, and #1 placement in the contest! ;-)
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:09:00 AM
PS, Andrea, Congratulations on your "it's all about love" win. Love LINDA
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Date: 2/6/2016 2:07:00 AM
Hi, Andrea, what a surprise, LOL, I'm congratulating all the latest contest. I spotted my daughters winning list. I knew Royal, was closing a contest early today. but, Dang!!! I had no idea she was going to finalize all the ones she had hanging in one night. LOL, I bet you are saying it's about time. Anyways, XOOL to see you on the top of her winning list. She has good taste that's all I have to say. Love LINDA
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Date: 7/26/2013 6:07:00 AM
Dreamy stuff my friend.Hugs
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Date: 7/17/2013 9:54:00 PM
I like this one. I am just heading to bed and tried to catch up on some comments Yes, I need this dream hunk to come to bed and rock it with passion. LOL. Nice one. love phyl
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Date: 7/1/2013 6:04:00 PM
Wow! That was some love note. I liked it. Thanks for sharing and for thinking I have wisdom.God bless you. I am now getting better. I can now do little things for myself and that feels good..... Lucilla
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Date: 6/25/2013 6:20:00 PM
Oh no, I hadn't seen this one was up for congrats as well, where will it ever end lol. Mind you Petal, who would not want to receive a note like this. Lovely. Take care, Richard
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Date: 6/24/2013 6:39:00 PM
tender and so loving congrats Shadow x smiles
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Date: 6/24/2013 11:51:00 AM
I knew this would be a winner!! Congrats!
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Date: 6/24/2013 12:59:00 AM
Very lovely Tanka. Well done and Congrats. AO
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:34:00 PM
Very sensual and lovely, dear Andrea. Many congrats on your top notch win. Elaine
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Date: 6/23/2013 6:00:00 PM
That's a helluva lot of Tanka. Such a sensual thirty one syllables. - Red
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Date: 6/23/2013 2:13:00 PM
A love note to my dreamboat just rings right off the page. May every night bring such delight no matter what your age.
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:19:00 PM
Hey this is cool. Now I am beginning to envy the blanket!LOL
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Date: 6/23/2013 1:21:00 AM
andrea I learnt one has to dare for the context .Great poets dare to give the best for the context.Let me atleast dare to comment few words. Sexy honey sexy. As shammi kapoor says Yahooo!
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Date: 6/23/2013 12:47:00 AM
Congrats, Andea, on the win!! Jag
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Date: 6/22/2013 6:02:00 PM
congrats on a great win Andrea
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Date: 6/22/2013 5:46:00 PM
super well done and ty for lovley comment on mine Shadow x smile
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